a splash of summer
Preserving the color of summer for years to come.9 total reviews
Comment from miajaffri
Good alliteration. Beautiful picture. For sure, summer can be a
good opportunity for plein air artists to create their masterpieces and
then fill books with beautiful pictures of their paintings.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2015
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Good alliteration. Beautiful picture. For sure, summer can be a
good opportunity for plein air artists to create their masterpieces and
then fill books with beautiful pictures of their paintings.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2015
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Thank yu for the kind review. Glad you liked it.
Comment from Dawn Munro
This is such a clever haiku - yes, I can see how a 'splash of summer' would appeal to any artist wishing to work in favourable weather, but also to capture the colours of the season. Good luck in the contest! (You always catch me without sixes!) (But then, I guess it's not hard to do since mine are usually gone by Sunday night or Monday...sigh...)
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2015
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This is such a clever haiku - yes, I can see how a 'splash of summer' would appeal to any artist wishing to work in favourable weather, but also to capture the colours of the season. Good luck in the contest! (You always catch me without sixes!) (But then, I guess it's not hard to do since mine are usually gone by Sunday night or Monday...sigh...)
Comment Written 27-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2015
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Thanks, Dawn. Appreciate virtuals.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from TAB_that's me
Very interesting. This haiku is unique and creative. I like the satori line. good luck to you in the contest.
~~Teresa~~
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2015
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Very interesting. This haiku is unique and creative. I like the satori line. good luck to you in the contest.
~~Teresa~~
Comment Written 26-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2015
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Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from rjuselius
this is not really a haiku per se. a haiku has a satori, which is a moment of observation or reflection that brings the two interconnected lines together. your poem is a continuous flow from line 1 to line 3.
anyhoo, thank you for sharing!
good luck in the contest!
blessings!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2015
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this is not really a haiku per se. a haiku has a satori, which is a moment of observation or reflection that brings the two interconnected lines together. your poem is a continuous flow from line 1 to line 3.
anyhoo, thank you for sharing!
good luck in the contest!
blessings!
rebekka x
Comment Written 26-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2015
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I think you are right. I made a change. Thanks you.
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
This is a beautiful haiku with a gorgeous picture. You have followed all the requirements for this type of poem. I wish you good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2015
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This is a beautiful haiku with a gorgeous picture. You have followed all the requirements for this type of poem. I wish you good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 26-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2015
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Thank you for the kind review. Someone brought to mind that it wasn't a true satori line so I changed it.
Comment from ProjectBluebook
Awesome picture! Yep, a real painting. It's definitely summer. Meets the rules, then some. I like the colorful portrait and colors that jump at you. The words are perfect. this is without doubt a contender for the contest. Will be some hard choices. Thanks for entering contest. wackydo
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2015
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Awesome picture! Yep, a real painting. It's definitely summer. Meets the rules, then some. I like the colorful portrait and colors that jump at you. The words are perfect. this is without doubt a contender for the contest. Will be some hard choices. Thanks for entering contest. wackydo
Comment Written 26-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2015
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Thank you for the kind review. Someone brought to mind that it wasn't a true satori line so I changed it.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Nice haiku. Follows the 5/7/5 format-right count. The distill experience is about artist. The kigo-summer. The two juxtaposed ideas? I don't see them. Satori? not sure. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2015
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Nice haiku. Follows the 5/7/5 format-right count. The distill experience is about artist. The kigo-summer. The two juxtaposed ideas? I don't see them. Satori? not sure. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2015
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Thank you for the kind review. Someone brought to mind that it wasn't a true satori line so I changed it.
Comment from Eric1
Hi Mystery author, this is an excellent entry for this particular competition. the use of plein (artist in the air) was inspirational, I wish you the best of luck in the contest my friend
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2015
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Hi Mystery author, this is an excellent entry for this particular competition. the use of plein (artist in the air) was inspirational, I wish you the best of luck in the contest my friend
Comment Written 26-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2015
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Thank you for the kind review. Someone brought to mind that it wasn't a true satori line so I changed it.
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It was my pleasure my friend
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is an excellent write, mystery writer, I love this haiku, I like how the imagery of the summer color makes the artist draw it. I wish you the best of luck in the contest
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2015
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this is an excellent write, mystery writer, I love this haiku, I like how the imagery of the summer color makes the artist draw it. I wish you the best of luck in the contest
Comment Written 26-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2015
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Thank you for the kind review. Someone brought to mind that it wasn't a true satori line so I changed it.