A Book of Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 39 "A Kiss (lune)"Assorted poems of love
13 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your presentation is great--the color scheme, the font color, the artwork. Good job on the syllable count.
I see no changes. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2015
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Your presentation is great--the color scheme, the font color, the artwork. Good job on the syllable count.
I see no changes. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2015
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I only received one vote...mine...lol
Thank you my friend for this review of my humble work.
Always justafan,
Missy
Comment from TPAC
Writer captures compassion between parties whom trust permits kisses giving the reader their opinion of its delights and pleasing welcomed treats
another suggestion with its intent both of them nice
Sweet nectar to my
lips tasting
A lover's kisses
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2015
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Writer captures compassion between parties whom trust permits kisses giving the reader their opinion of its delights and pleasing welcomed treats
another suggestion with its intent both of them nice
Sweet nectar to my
lips tasting
A lover's kisses
Comment Written 26-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2015
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Blessings TPAC for this kind review. :)
Always justafan,
Missy
Comment from BeasPeas
Romantic and true--"sweet nectar." Who doesn't like kisses from that special person. Image is perfect to accompany your words. Marilyn/BeasPeas
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2015
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Romantic and true--"sweet nectar." Who doesn't like kisses from that special person. Image is perfect to accompany your words. Marilyn/BeasPeas
Comment Written 26-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2015
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Awe thank you BP for the swell review. Yes special kisses are a great gift.
Always justafan,
Missy
Comment from Master Philip
There's no better use of your tastebuds than using them to experience a lover's flavor...
This little poem is perfect.
How exciting.
Good job!
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2015
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There's no better use of your tastebuds than using them to experience a lover's flavor...
This little poem is perfect.
How exciting.
Good job!
Comment Written 25-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2015
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Thank you Master...lol
Always
Comment from judiverse
You follow the 5-3-5 format perfectly, and best of luck in the contest. "Sweet nectar to taste" adds an interesting observation. The word "nectar" works well in it and adds sense of taste appeal. Nice alliteration with "lover's" and "lips." Great choice of artwork. judi
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2015
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You follow the 5-3-5 format perfectly, and best of luck in the contest. "Sweet nectar to taste" adds an interesting observation. The word "nectar" works well in it and adds sense of taste appeal. Nice alliteration with "lover's" and "lips." Great choice of artwork. judi
Comment Written 25-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2015
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Thank you so much for your encouraging review, Judi. When the voting ends I will venture to your profile to return the favor :)
Always
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You're very welcome. judi
Comment from Ric Myworld
New to poetry and its many styles and structures, I'm forced to trust my ears and eyes to find what touches and interests me. I have grown to enjoy the shorter types that seem to say so much with so few words. Now, I just wish we weren't given so few sixes to go around. Great job. :-)
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2015
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New to poetry and its many styles and structures, I'm forced to trust my ears and eyes to find what touches and interests me. I have grown to enjoy the shorter types that seem to say so much with so few words. Now, I just wish we weren't given so few sixes to go around. Great job. :-)
Comment Written 25-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2015
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Hi Ric, you are not by yourself here...scares me too. Will look for some of your work to show my appreciation for the nice review :)
Always
Comment from ellie6
A whole love story in a few well chosen words. I could find no fault with this.The illustration is superb as well. beautifully written.I
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2015
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A whole love story in a few well chosen words. I could find no fault with this.The illustration is superb as well. beautifully written.I
Comment Written 25-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2015
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Thank you so much for the splendid review and the "bling". :)
Always
Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT
All right you are now the Queen of Passion.. You should be careful my Lady Queen for that nectar of the kiss could be the taste of poison... One that breaks the heart apart so much that it will never love again...
tk
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2015
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All right you are now the Queen of Passion.. You should be careful my Lady Queen for that nectar of the kiss could be the taste of poison... One that breaks the heart apart so much that it will never love again...
tk
Comment Written 25-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2015
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Oh I surely know not of what you speak Sir Knight. Poison in a kiss, a heart so broken as to never love again, perish the thought.
Always
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Nice lune for the lune contest prompt. You have the right amount of syllables. I like the picture and the background color and the font. Good job!
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2015
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Nice lune for the lune contest prompt. You have the right amount of syllables. I like the picture and the background color and the font. Good job!
Comment Written 25-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2015
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GBR, Thank you for the kind review :)
Always
Comment from Eric1
Hi Mystery author, this is a wonderful entry for this particular competition, The artwork goes really well with those wonderfully chosen words, I wish you the best of luck in the contest my friend.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2015
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Hi Mystery author, this is a wonderful entry for this particular competition, The artwork goes really well with those wonderfully chosen words, I wish you the best of luck in the contest my friend.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2015
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Blessings to you, Eric1 for this well-received review :)
Always
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You are most welcome my friend