Comment from danpald

Excellent

Without the cover comes the flies
Filled with sweet vinegar to swim
All the norm of summer time
As the warmth does cider delight

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 18-Jun-2015

And it works...thanks for reviewing.

Comment from skye

Excellent

cup of cider vinegar converts to pool for fruit flys -- flies

The seasonal word - pool
does fit syllable count
Present tense
Did put haiku in the title
Did say one-line haiku in description
Well done.

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2015

Thanks for heads up n the spag.

Comment from Jeanie Mercer

Excellent

This haiku has vivid and interesting concrete images. I see "fruit flies" as summer kigo. (Actually, the poem seems more like a two-line haiku stretched into one line.) Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2015

Thanks. I changed it to read more like a one liner.