2015 Haiku
Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "Desolating Grief "A collection of haiku I wrote in 2015
67 total reviews
Comment from rjuselius
This is a worthy winner dear friend! It's well composed and presented! The satori us perfect for the haiku.
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2015
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This is a worthy winner dear friend! It's well composed and presented! The satori us perfect for the haiku.
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 09-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2015
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Thank you so much, I appreciate your review and kind words :)
Comment from celticeagle
What a fire! We have them here every year! It is already hot here and we are in for a bad one this year I am afraid. You piece is short and to the point. I might add a little history or a little more about the people just to give it flavor. It is informative but it also needs to have reader inner interest. Has their been fires there before? Were the people prepared or did it come as a total surprise? Etc.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2015
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What a fire! We have them here every year! It is already hot here and we are in for a bad one this year I am afraid. You piece is short and to the point. I might add a little history or a little more about the people just to give it flavor. It is informative but it also needs to have reader inner interest. Has their been fires there before? Were the people prepared or did it come as a total surprise? Etc.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2015
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Thank you
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You are welcome.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi GBR - Congratulations - a great 5/7/5 and a great piece of writing. I can see why you won. I absolutely love line 2 - 'Pleading Branches to Heaven' - a great personification of branches and an inspirational piece of writing. Good alliteration in line one and whole superb. Warm regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2015
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Hi GBR - Congratulations - a great 5/7/5 and a great piece of writing. I can see why you won. I absolutely love line 2 - 'Pleading Branches to Heaven' - a great personification of branches and an inspirational piece of writing. Good alliteration in line one and whole superb. Warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 09-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2015
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Thank you so much, I appreciate your review and kind words :)
Comment from misscookie
The artwork you choose to go with your poem is a perfect match. This is what I call a food for thought poem.... meaning after you read it you go mm.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2015
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The artwork you choose to go with your poem is a perfect match. This is what I call a food for thought poem.... meaning after you read it you go mm.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 09-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2015
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Thank you so much, I appreciate your review and kind words :)
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you're very welcome. Until next time.
Cookie
Comment from Eternal Muse
A very powerful haiku, no wonder it won. Amazing visuals. I especially liked the message in the last line. Excellent picture to go with it
Congratulations on your win.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2015
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A very powerful haiku, no wonder it won. Amazing visuals. I especially liked the message in the last line. Excellent picture to go with it
Congratulations on your win.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2015
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Thank you so much, I appreciate your review and kind words :)
Comment from CR Delport
It is sad how a fire can cause so much havoc and destruction. This is very well written and a deserved winner. Well done.
Take care.
Christelle.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2015
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It is sad how a fire can cause so much havoc and destruction. This is very well written and a deserved winner. Well done.
Take care.
Christelle.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2015
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Thank you so much, I appreciate your review and kind words :)
Comment from Autumn Splendour
Wow, in three lines you have created an the devastation of forest fire on the trees who pleaded for relieve but ended up being consumed. Congratulations for winning.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2015
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Wow, in three lines you have created an the devastation of forest fire on the trees who pleaded for relieve but ended up being consumed. Congratulations for winning.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2015
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Thank you so much, I appreciate your review and kind words :)
Comment from shanat
Great poem, congratulations on the competition win! I can see why it won, the background along with the colour scheme added to the power, congratulations again
Take care :)
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2015
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Great poem, congratulations on the competition win! I can see why it won, the background along with the colour scheme added to the power, congratulations again
Take care :)
Comment Written 08-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2015
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thank you very much i appreciate your excellent review
Comment from Mary Ann MCPhedran
A well written poem with good imagery. The display of the poem is excellent and easy tothe description was easy to read and understand. I enjoyed reading your poem and I do remember the news of the fire. A tragic memmory. Mary
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2015
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A well written poem with good imagery. The display of the poem is excellent and easy tothe description was easy to read and understand. I enjoyed reading your poem and I do remember the news of the fire. A tragic memmory. Mary
Comment Written 08-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2015
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thank you very much for the 6 stars, i appreciate your excellent review
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Congrats firstly on your win, and also for being able to put so much emotion into this 5 - 7 - 5 Haiku. Very dramatic photo of this burnt out forest. Love the line - Pleading branches to heaven - winner.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2015
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Congrats firstly on your win, and also for being able to put so much emotion into this 5 - 7 - 5 Haiku. Very dramatic photo of this burnt out forest. Love the line - Pleading branches to heaven - winner.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2015
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thank you very much for the 6 stars and excellent review