Beautiful Death
Viewing comments for Chapter 10008 "Trapped am I"from birth I have longed for death
7 total reviews
Comment from erspring
I really like this poem
there is really a lot being said
this poem opens the door for many conversations
great job
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2015
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I really like this poem
there is really a lot being said
this poem opens the door for many conversations
great job
Comment Written 02-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2015
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Thank you.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is an excellent write, cbat, you did an excellent job writing this free style poem about wishing to have the right to live your life as you choose. I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2015
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this is an excellent write, cbat, you did an excellent job writing this free style poem about wishing to have the right to live your life as you choose. I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2015
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Thank you.
Comment from Walu Feral
G'day Coral. This is heavy duty stuff and seriously well written. You have come a long way in such a short time with your writing my friend. Congratulations on another great piece and it has no spags that I can see, well done. Cheers Fez
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2015
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G'day Coral. This is heavy duty stuff and seriously well written. You have come a long way in such a short time with your writing my friend. Congratulations on another great piece and it has no spags that I can see, well done. Cheers Fez
Comment Written 08-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2015
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It is always good to hear from you.
Thank you.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Good job Cbat! This poem sometimes made me giggle "I don't give a crap
I've had enough of that" hehehe... I know what you mean. I like this poem, it's very unique.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2015
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Good job Cbat! This poem sometimes made me giggle "I don't give a crap
I've had enough of that" hehehe... I know what you mean. I like this poem, it's very unique.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2015
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Thank you.
My Bi-Polar got the best of me.
Comment from sibhus
Quite a morose poem, but it is well written. Some really excellent lines
How to escape
old age does rape
dignity and pride
nothing to hide
I liked how you have your stanzas short and brief. They give your thoughts a powerful punch. Not something I would want to dwell on, but I can empathize with your thoughts. Still a well written poem.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2015
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Quite a morose poem, but it is well written. Some really excellent lines
How to escape
old age does rape
dignity and pride
nothing to hide
I liked how you have your stanzas short and brief. They give your thoughts a powerful punch. Not something I would want to dwell on, but I can empathize with your thoughts. Still a well written poem.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2015
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Thank you!
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
This is your heart and soul and your poured it all out for all of us to read. Not sure what exactly is making you feel this way but I've been there too. I've tried to end my life and I'm glad I had people to talk to. If you ever need to talk let me know. Private message me on here and we'll talk. Seriously, we're all here for you and we do care
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2015
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This is your heart and soul and your poured it all out for all of us to read. Not sure what exactly is making you feel this way but I've been there too. I've tried to end my life and I'm glad I had people to talk to. If you ever need to talk let me know. Private message me on here and we'll talk. Seriously, we're all here for you and we do care
Comment Written 06-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2015
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People like you help distract me, thank you.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Beautiful, but bittersweet poetry. I'm glad you are able to share your thoughts with all of us, but I hope your spirits lift. You have reached out to us, and that's a good sign. Take care,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2015
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Beautiful, but bittersweet poetry. I'm glad you are able to share your thoughts with all of us, but I hope your spirits lift. You have reached out to us, and that's a good sign. Take care,
Rhonda
Comment Written 06-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2015
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Thanks again.