The Hand that Feeds Her...
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Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
Very well done in producing a very powerful poem in such a short way.
But just once, I would like to see the word father replaced with mother. they abuse too.
Good luck in the competition.
GMG
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2015
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Hi there,
Very well done in producing a very powerful poem in such a short way.
But just once, I would like to see the word father replaced with mother. they abuse too.
Good luck in the competition.
GMG
Comment Written 03-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2015
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Oh you are very right. After the voting completes I'd love to speak...
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements nicely with a spot on line and syllable count. The message is powerful in execution and packaging. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you for sharing it.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2015
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This meets the contest requirements nicely with a spot on line and syllable count. The message is powerful in execution and packaging. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you for sharing it.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2015
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thank you so much!
Comment from TPAC
Dramatic in suspense writer expresses alarm in opening defining emotions in living exchanges captive in thought to the reader a mini movie detailed in short story I feel very creative
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2015
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Dramatic in suspense writer expresses alarm in opening defining emotions in living exchanges captive in thought to the reader a mini movie detailed in short story I feel very creative
Comment Written 03-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2015
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Thank you! Always such a pleasure hearing from you
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Excellent awareness of the abuse of children. So many are hurt. Our family brings in the youth to our house for home cooked meals and family time. We go to horse ranches (Destiny Youth Ranch). We teach the love of The Lord and that they are important. We need to take a step of faith and touch the youth in love.
God bless! flylikeaneagle
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2015
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Excellent awareness of the abuse of children. So many are hurt. Our family brings in the youth to our house for home cooked meals and family time. We go to horse ranches (Destiny Youth Ranch). We teach the love of The Lord and that they are important. We need to take a step of faith and touch the youth in love.
God bless! flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 03-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2015
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God Bless you too. That is truly doing the Lord's work. Thank you for reading this. Thank you.
Comment from danpald
Bitter truth does come to life
With the poem that burns the heart
Filled with rage for the temper
That is held against the child beater
Well you say this needs to be known
Still the poem does hit so strong
May we pray this can be changed
With love coming to the child in the end
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2015
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Bitter truth does come to life
With the poem that burns the heart
Filled with rage for the temper
That is held against the child beater
Well you say this needs to be known
Still the poem does hit so strong
May we pray this can be changed
With love coming to the child in the end
Comment Written 03-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2015
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So true Dan. So true. Thank you.
Comment from RYME4U
The meaning you have put in this 2/10/2 poem is excellent. Very profound but tragic message. The illustration you used here is heartbreaking but a mqatch for your sad words.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2015
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The meaning you have put in this 2/10/2 poem is excellent. Very profound but tragic message. The illustration you used here is heartbreaking but a mqatch for your sad words.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2015
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Thank you!
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
This is a touching 2-10-2 prompt entry, and the picture of the little child is devastating. Good luck to you in the contest, Jeanie Mercer
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2015
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This is a touching 2-10-2 prompt entry, and the picture of the little child is devastating. Good luck to you in the contest, Jeanie Mercer
Comment Written 02-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2015
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Thank you Jeanie!