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Beautiful Death

Viewing comments for Chapter 10011 "beautiful child/not sweet not mild"
from birth I have longed for death

6 total reviews 
Comment from Loyd C. Taylor, Sr
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Hello poet friend
A very good description and a great story in your poem. Your notes were helpful
Thanks for using my artwork, I am honored. Loyd

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2015

reply by the author on 05-Jul-2015
    Thank you!
reply by Loyd C. Taylor, Sr on 06-Jul-2015
    My pleasure, Loyd
reply by Anonymous Member on 10-Jul-2015
    My pleasure, Loyd
Comment from Walu Feral
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G'day CJ. This is another very well written and thought out mate. I have no idea what form it is because I'm not that smart, but what ever it is you did it a great justice. Keep at it, you will be up the rankings before you know it. Cheers Fez

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2015

reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015
    Thank's!
    I am totally in the dark when it comes to poem rules or form's, I just put what is in my head down.

    I am sure I am breaking rules.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Good job cbat!! Nice poem. Good format, font size and color. It rhymes ok. The action flows smoothly. You used descriptive language.


 Comment Written 31-May-2015

reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015
    Thank you!
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
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How cute. It's nice to know that some of the stinkers can turn out well in the end. My daughter was a bit of a handful and is now a lawyer. No she can give someone else hell!
Rhonda

 Comment Written 31-May-2015

reply by the author on 31-May-2015
    Thank you!
Comment from Curly Girly
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This was a fun poem to read.
I am not sure why you chose to use a capital 'P' in these two lines:
finding a Pin or needle
all Passing she poked

 Comment Written 31-May-2015

reply by the author on 31-May-2015
    Because I overlook so many things.

    Thank you.

    I will Fix it.
Comment from lalajovanoski
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ver well writte piece of wor Bravbravo for your ability to convey such a powerful messag please continue to share and thank you for sharin please continue to share and thank you for sharing this

 Comment Written 31-May-2015

reply by the author on 31-May-2015
    Thank you!j