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Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "Masaki the Monarch Butterfly"A delightful Childen Lesson Book.
2 total reviews
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
I am going with the five because I love the storyline which I am sure with some work you can turn into something divine. I am always impressed by the pure joy that shines through your writing which is contagious. You do have some work to do on grammar and such before this is truly reader ready and I hope that you will make the effort for the story is worth it. Nicely done and I thank you for sharing it.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2015
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I am going with the five because I love the storyline which I am sure with some work you can turn into something divine. I am always impressed by the pure joy that shines through your writing which is contagious. You do have some work to do on grammar and such before this is truly reader ready and I hope that you will make the effort for the story is worth it. Nicely done and I thank you for sharing it.
Comment Written 30-May-2015
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2015
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Thanks so much for your amazing thoughts and review!
Ricky 1024.
Comment from cbat
A good story.
You tie in the idea passed from one to another of a butterfly being someone we knew.
I like this idea.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2015
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A good story.
You tie in the idea passed from one to another of a butterfly being someone we knew.
I like this idea.
Comment Written 30-May-2015
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2015
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Thanks so much for your amazing thoughts and review!
Ricky 1024.