Comment from catandheath

Excellent

Wow, what a captivating poem about one's beloved. This is the speaker's fiance, I assume? Very lovely and passionate. How our senses becoming completely enveloped in the other person really comes through here. Very nice.

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 13-Aug-2015

thanks for the review

Comment from Ben Colder

Excellent

Nothing wrong with this poem I find. My sun shines brightly
Its warmth
Makes easy
My anticipation
Of rendezvous
And destiny

Snow predicted here.

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 13-Aug-2015

thanks for the review