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I look in the mirror .

A free style poem

22 total reviews 
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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Your poem related to me so well. Dieting can let us look nicer in clothes, but the bits that show, are sagging and wrinkled! So not fair! Really good poem, my friend. xsx sandra.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2015


reply by the author on 26-Mar-2015
    Thanks for the kind review, Ine. Have a great last part of the week.
Comment from Treischel
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A free verse self-assessment while seeing the world through a new set of glasses, i chuckled at your self-deprecating humor, although that for you its no laughing matter. In fact, my wife had stomach surgery and lost over 100 pounds. She has the same issue that you have.

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2015


reply by the author on 25-Mar-2015
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely last part of the week.
Comment from nelliesellie
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I love the picture. I love the poem. New glasses are not needed when we look at our self. We see what time has done to us. Most people are fairly happy with it. Great work.

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2015


reply by the author on 25-Mar-2015
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely last part of the week.
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
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Hi Ine - a truthful free verse on how you see yourself now that you have new glasses. The truth always pays in the end, LOL. I know that Robert loves you whatever. Warm regards Dorothy x

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2015


reply by the author on 24-Mar-2015
    Thanks for your lovely review, Ine. Have a great and lovely week.
Comment from adewpearl
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good use of enjambment
to keep thoughts flowing from line to line
vivid descriptive detail in your poetic self portrait :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2015


reply by the author on 24-Mar-2015
    Thanks for your lovely review, Ine. Have a great and lovely week.
Comment from Njorgensen
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Interesting insight into self image. I thought you expressed this very well. There is an innate harsh critique of oneself that most of us employ.
If honest, we could see we're made imperfect, which is just right.

Nancy

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2015


reply by the author on 24-Mar-2015
    Thanks for your lovely review, Ine. Have a great and lovely week.
Comment from Walu Feral
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G'day Ine. That is another great little piece mate. I now have 3 sets of eye glasses and when that happens I know that age is catching up with me. I am happy that you can see your beauty now. Cheers Fez

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2015


reply by the author on 24-Mar-2015
    Thanks for your lovely review, Ine. Have a great and lovely week. I have two pair of them.
Comment from Ronni
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Well what is most beautiful about you, is your total honesty and great
spirit, no matter the ailments or flaws of mortal body. You need no
mirrors to remind you of that, it is seen with or without them.
Congrats on new glasses, they look cool! Thanks for sharing..
Blessings, Ronni

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2015


reply by the author on 24-Mar-2015
    Thanks for your lovely review, Ine. Have a great and lovely week.
Comment from amada
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Thank you for sharing this honest and sincere poem. Most of us lose weight when we have health problems. Good times will come in the summer. Let's keep positive.

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2015


reply by the author on 24-Mar-2015
    Thanks for your lovely review, Ine. Have a great and lovely week.
Comment from Joan E.
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I recently got new glasses too, and there are "not as many flaws as before". I liked your coinage of "look-throughs". In contrast, I haven't lost weight and have big feet! Best wishes with the new specs- Joan

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2015


reply by the author on 24-Mar-2015
    Thanks for your lovely review, Ine. Have a great and lovely week.