Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I am not into the horror genre, but your 5-7-5 is compelling. The werewolf poster reinforces your theme well, and you even managed to include alliteration to intensify the mood. Best wishes in the contest- Joan

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2015

Thanks for reviewing.Happy weekend.

Comment from daeneam

Excellent

According to the Urban dictionary, trolling is being a prick on the internet because you can. I'm trying to connect the haiku and the title and the teaser, but I guess, I'm too tired to do so... hehe c", mae

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2015

Thank you for reviewing.

Comment from lancellot

Excellent

Hmm, it is very interesting. I am wondering about that first line.

fiendish shift-changer

do you mean?

fiendish shape-shifter

I think that is proper work for them.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2015

That is so weird. When I wrote that I knew there was something wrong, just couldn't pinpoint it.Thanks for the heads up...duh!

Comment from meggie13

Excellent

Beware who your babysitter is!! This one changes from werewolf and vampire
to a babysitter. Good entry for the contest. Good luck.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2015

Thanks for reviewing. shift-changers can do that....lol

reply by meggie13 on 16-Mar-2015

You are welcome.