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Jesus, the Great Physician

A young woman's broken heart healed.

7 total reviews 
Comment from pharp
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This is a very profound story giving a testimony honoring our Lord and Savior for healing your broken heart after you put your trust in him. It is good to share the blessings that the Lord have bestowed upon us, we never know how they may affect others and what they may be going through. Thanks for the invite to read this short yet powerful read. Blessings.................... And congratulation on the "WIN!!"

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2015


reply by the author on 06-Sep-2015
    Thank you for taking time from your busy schedule to read my poem.
Comment from Country Girl47
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Very good advice. Like how you described Jesus as the real physician. How he can heal the broken hearted.
Ty for sharing.

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 09-Feb-2015
    Thanks for your review and the stars you gave me. Yes, Jesus is the great physician.
reply by Country Girl47 on 09-Feb-2015
    You're very welcome
Comment from emrpoems
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Jesus is the Great Physician bring all your concerns to Him and you will be cured. I have taken that advice and my life is worry-free. well written

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 09-Feb-2015
    Thanks for your stars and review. Recently, I have been taken vitamin pills which are good for your health and I thought to myself, wouldn't it be nice if one had Jesus on it, it would solve all your worries. Once again, thanks for viewing.
reply by emrpoems on 09-Feb-2015
    Pills marked Jesus are free and you can spend a few minutes every day with Him Just like you take the time to exercise or eat
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
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This meets the contest requirements nicely with a testimonial to the benefits of the advice you have so kindly offered. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you so much for sharing this with me.

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 09-Feb-2015
    Thanks for your stars, review even as far as checking the requirements and the best of luck in the voting.

Comment from Jeanie Mercer
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Sue, thanks so much for entering the contest with this good advice. (You might want to edit your entry and change the description line, which according to the stated rules should show the word count of the piece. Also, it would be good - and more accurate - to change the category from "Spiritual Fiction" to NON-FICTION.) Love, Jeanie Mercer

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 09-Feb-2015
    Thanks for the review and stars, I will look into it and make the changes. If I would have thought at the time I would have made it non-fiction.
reply by Jeanie Mercer on 09-Feb-2015
    Thanks. I saw that you have added the word count. (I think you can still change this to "non-fiction" if you want to.)
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2015
    I will check again, but I thought that I immediately went in and changed it. I guess I did save it.
reply by Jeanie Mercer on 09-Feb-2015
    This may be harder to change than I realized, and may be some kind of glitch in the system. I noticed several entries were labeled fiction when obviously they were non-fiction. I don't think it will matter as far as the judging committee is concerned.
Comment from kiwijenny
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So short and succinct and very good...
We forget that life isn't about the house and things ..it's the love ain the house that made it a home that is important..
Broken hearts can only be mended by JESUS
God bless

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 09-Feb-2015
    Thanks for the review and stars and the poem about adjusting.
Comment from Dr. Nad
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Jesus, the Great Physician is a very nice piece that tells us the story of a woman in pain. She has found that a house is not a home if love is missing. She also found the giver of Love and healing came. I got the moral of the story! good luck on the writing prompt contest.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 09-Feb-2015
    Thanks for the review and stars Dr. Nad.
reply by Dr. Nad on 11-Feb-2015

    You are very welcome,
    Embrace the Love from above!