January Snapshot
Non fiction6 total reviews
Comment from Acquired Taste
Very visual piece - I felt as if I should grab my scarf. Growing up in the Adirondacks, the cold, snow and icy winds were invigorating and your piece bought back those wonderful memories.
You engaged your reader nicely. A very enjoyable read. AT=/
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2015
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Very visual piece - I felt as if I should grab my scarf. Growing up in the Adirondacks, the cold, snow and icy winds were invigorating and your piece bought back those wonderful memories.
You engaged your reader nicely. A very enjoyable read. AT=/
Comment Written 16-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2015
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Thanks for a great review zanya
Comment from Smoothiecool
you allow the reader to see and feel the wintery cold as you take your walk and the squirrel that captures your attention
good imagery to portray message
interesting write that keeps one engage enjoying the read
cheers Smoothiecool
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2015
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you allow the reader to see and feel the wintery cold as you take your walk and the squirrel that captures your attention
good imagery to portray message
interesting write that keeps one engage enjoying the read
cheers Smoothiecool
Comment Written 16-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2015
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Loved this review zanya
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most welcome ...SC <:> Faye
Comment from krys123
Zanya; I really enjoyed your short piece on winter and especially enjoyed you tying in Wordworth's "Song to a Snowdrop" which tied in your short piece very well And added a special flavor to your imagery. Your imagery was beautiful and very descriptive as well as exquisitely expressive and gave me the feeling as though I was there experiencing the adventure. Your writing was very congruent and clearly written and the topic was expressed in a way that it was understandable. Thank you for sharing and posting and may the good Lord be with you always Zanya.
Alex
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2015
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Zanya; I really enjoyed your short piece on winter and especially enjoyed you tying in Wordworth's "Song to a Snowdrop" which tied in your short piece very well And added a special flavor to your imagery. Your imagery was beautiful and very descriptive as well as exquisitely expressive and gave me the feeling as though I was there experiencing the adventure. Your writing was very congruent and clearly written and the topic was expressed in a way that it was understandable. Thank you for sharing and posting and may the good Lord be with you always Zanya.
Alex
Comment Written 16-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2015
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I am delighted that you enjoyed reading this little 'wintry' snapshot and thank you for taking time to give a very positive review zanya
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You are so welcome my friend
Comment from adewpearl
good mood-creating description of setting with strong sensory and emotional appeal
you set the stage and introduce the narrator well
like a well-cut diamond, it blows - add the comma
I really like the way the details make me feel as if I'm there
Brooke :-)
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2015
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good mood-creating description of setting with strong sensory and emotional appeal
you set the stage and introduce the narrator well
like a well-cut diamond, it blows - add the comma
I really like the way the details make me feel as if I'm there
Brooke :-)
Comment Written 15-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2015
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So glad you enjoyed reading this little snapshot - thanks for a wonderful review zanya
Comment from kiwijenny
Glorious imagery...just glorious how your describe the day
Almost made me throw off my wool blanket and go outside
Almost... I applaud your word choices...celestial tapestry well cut diamond
Well done
God bless
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2015
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Glorious imagery...just glorious how your describe the day
Almost made me throw off my wool blanket and go outside
Almost... I applaud your word choices...celestial tapestry well cut diamond
Well done
God bless
Comment Written 15-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2015
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I am delighted that you enjoyed this little snapshot - hope you threw off that wool blanket and set off into the wintry landscape LOL ZANYA
Comment from giraffmang
Thius was an enjoyable slice of a cold January morning.
The writing was good, producing good imagery and scene setting. Great use of descriptive language giving the reader a real fell.
Nicely done
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2015
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Thius was an enjoyable slice of a cold January morning.
The writing was good, producing good imagery and scene setting. Great use of descriptive language giving the reader a real fell.
Nicely done
Comment Written 15-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2015
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I like that description 'slice of a cold January morning' I am delighted with this review - thank you for reading and critique zanya