Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

I enjoyed your poem. You met the criteria for the format well. There is great flow to your words and a great message too. Many will be able to identify with this poem.
The picture is perfect.

Good job. No changes. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 27-May-2015

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reply by the author on 27-May-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine, Have a very good week,

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Wonderful artwork.
-Nicely presented poem that is written well.
-The first line is very good; I like the personification with the heart having feet.
-This idea continues with other lines and is very effective.
-You followed the directions in the prompt.

 Comment Written 27-May-2015

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reply by the author on 27-May-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine, Have a very good week,

reply by Pam (respa) on 27-May-2015

You are welcome for the review, and you have a good week, too.

Comment from inside echo

Excellent

Very well written, with great descriptive analogies. The art you have chosen if perfect for you poem. It describes your poem perfectly. Well done. Thank you for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
echo

 Comment Written 27-May-2015

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reply by the author on 27-May-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine, Have a very good week,

reply by inside echo on 27-May-2015

You are welcome. Have a good week also.

Comment from rjuselius

Excellent

This is a blessed piece of poetic art dear robina! It is a lighthearted yet insightful. Very well presented my friend!
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings!
Rebekka x

 Comment Written 27-May-2015

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reply by the author on 27-May-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine, Have a very good week,

Comment from michaelcahill

Excellent

This was the greatest fun. What a perfect use of this form. We have all felt like this, those of us that are lucky enough. You depict the feelings to a tee. So very well done. mikey

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Dec-2014

Thanks for your review. Have a nice weekend, Ine

Comment from Brian Terry

Excellent

Hi Robina
I liked this triolet very much indeed.
The image fitted so well with the poem.
I can really relate to the sentiments expressed.
On a personal note how are you
warm regards
Brian

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2014

Thanks for your review. Have a nice weekend, Ine. I am reasonable, still taking tablets against a fungus in my throat.

Comment from Walu Feral

Excellent

Wow you are such a talent in so many forms of poetry mate. Your work is always a pleasure to review and your choice of artwork is always exceptional. Good luck in the contest. Cheers Fez

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2014

Thanks for your kind review and your compliment. Have a lovely weekend, Ine

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi, Robina,

This type of poem almost seems like a tongue-twister, which I might add, you did admirable. Awesome artwork paired with it to make a stunning presentation.

Good luck in the contest.

*Happy Holidays*

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*;*)

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2014

Thanks for your review. Have a nice weekend, Ine

Comment from pipersfancy

Excellent

Very nice entry for the Triolet Poetry contest! It is a form I have not yet tried, but I see the need for careful phrasing as the lines are repeated. You've done a lovely job of putting together repeated lines that seem to shift in nuance as the poem unfolds.

Good luck with the contest!

PF

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2014

Thanks for your review. Have a nice weekend, Ine

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

Beautiful imagery...my awkward heart has no right feet...
Awesome...to capture the giddiness of that loving heart
Well done.i like your triolet
God b
Ess

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2014

Thanks for your review. Have a nice weekend, Ine