The LifewasSnatched Out Of My Depth!
A poem of my pain.2 total reviews
Comment from ChelseaAnel
A beautifully expressed story detailing your gains (births) and losses(death). My enjoyment of this poem is that you bring focus to the joys this life has brought you despite the sadness that followed. It is the precious memories from which we can draw strength. I really like your descripton of your two way relationship with God.
"I prayed for a Son like Him and God respected me."
This poem expresses well the love you have for your family.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2014
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A beautifully expressed story detailing your gains (births) and losses(death). My enjoyment of this poem is that you bring focus to the joys this life has brought you despite the sadness that followed. It is the precious memories from which we can draw strength. I really like your descripton of your two way relationship with God.
"I prayed for a Son like Him and God respected me."
This poem expresses well the love you have for your family.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2014
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Thank you!
Marry ME?
LOL!
icky.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, ricky, you did an excellent job writing this story about the children you had and the daughter that was your tomboy , surviving the cord being around her neck, and saved from the car wreck your son was killed in because of being told to ride with somebody else. I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2014
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this is very well written, ricky, you did an excellent job writing this story about the children you had and the daughter that was your tomboy , surviving the cord being around her neck, and saved from the car wreck your son was killed in because of being told to ride with somebody else. I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2014
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Thanks Sweetwoodjax!
"The worst nightmares, my wife's suicide and my three attempts... My Son and going insane after words.
My house {almost lost that for my wife didn't pay the bills... My career slashed and thrown in the trash for Jason worked with me...
A Car, two motorcycle and a bike accident worth 14 million!
{I should have died!}
Is it any wonder re viewer's state that my works are never boring?"
A dream next cackled "Aileen Invasion!
In 39 minutes!
Ricky.