Comment from Drew Delaney

Excellent

This was great for having to use only one letter in your poem. I think you did a fascinating job and I want to wish you the best of luck in the Alliteration Celebration writing prompt contest.

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2014

Thanks, Drew.

Steve

Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

You meet the contest requirements nicely with this well penned piece. This is what comes of "M"eddling mercilessly with mammaries. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you so much for sharing this with me.

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2014

Hmmmm No more mammary meddling for me - apparently the voters didn't like it!

Steve

Comment from jim lawler

Good

Thanks for sharing your little verse. I think I got the point though it stretches the imagination. It's a real tongue twister. Good with it Jim

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2014

Thank you!

Steve

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

This isn't a style I like but since it is for a prompt you did it perfectly:) Good luck to you in the contest.
~~Teresa~~

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2014

Thank you!

Steve

Comment from dennis4242

Exceptional

Wow!! I hope you won an award for "MOLLY" All the words used correctly starting with "M" . I am not sure I could write something like. What a great picture you added.
Good Job!

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2014

Thanks for the kind words and the six stars.

You may be the only fan of this post if nthe voting is anything to go by!

Steve

Comment from Neonewman

Excellent

Wonderful entry for this alliteration celebration writing prompt. You followed the guidelines well and have a great chance at bringing this one home. Good luck in the contest and God Bless!

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2014

Thank you!

Steve

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is very well written, mystery writer, use of alliteration as required, great picture choice, a little risqué with the first line. good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2014

Thank you!

Steve

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

an abundance of amusing alliteration LOL
solid abcb rhyming
strong visuals
lots of fun with words - this one has left me smiling :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2014

Thank you!

Steve