Liverpool Lovelies
Contest entry: Beatlemania19 total reviews
Comment from Sasha
YOu have done a marvelous job with this one. They certainly did rock the universe, didn't they. Terrific entry for this fun contest and I sincerely wish you all the best.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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YOu have done a marvelous job with this one. They certainly did rock the universe, didn't they. Terrific entry for this fun contest and I sincerely wish you all the best.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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Thank you so much, Sasha! I am thrilled you liked this and happy to report my losing streak is still intact LOL.
Comment from rod007
A worthy contender for the contest. They did rock the universe in the golden era of their awesome music and now as new generations are discovering their magic. Well done.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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A worthy contender for the contest. They did rock the universe in the golden era of their awesome music and now as new generations are discovering their magic. Well done.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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Thank you so much! I appreciate the kind words of encouragement very much.
Comment from JeffreyVPerry
When I think of the Beatles one of the first things I think is Liverpool. Well done. As soon as I read it, I knew, before, I read what the prompt was.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2014
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When I think of the Beatles one of the first things I think is Liverpool. Well done. As soon as I read it, I knew, before, I read what the prompt was.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2014
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Thank you so much, Jeffrey! This was a really fun topic to write about and everyone has at least one fond memory of the Beatles. I am so happy that you liked this and always appreciative of the time you take to provide such encouraging support.
Comment from judiverse
It was so sweet of you to send a note of congratulations. You have a great Beatlemania poem. The Beatles did create quite a sensation. I remember one of my cousins saw their concert in Indianapolis, and they were on the Ed Sullivan show. They were lovelies starting out--they looked so fresh and innocent. You're right--they did rock the universe. Excellent use of alliteration with Liverpool lovelies and rhythm and rock. judi
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2014
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It was so sweet of you to send a note of congratulations. You have a great Beatlemania poem. The Beatles did create quite a sensation. I remember one of my cousins saw their concert in Indianapolis, and they were on the Ed Sullivan show. They were lovelies starting out--they looked so fresh and innocent. You're right--they did rock the universe. Excellent use of alliteration with Liverpool lovelies and rhythm and rock. judi
Comment Written 11-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2014
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Thank you so much, Judi! They inspired a whole generation and continue to touch people throughout the world with their lovely lyrics and lilting harmonies. I am so happy you think I did them justice and very grateful for the wonderfully uplifting words of encouragement for my simple little scribble.
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You're so welcome. The Beatles are so much above most of the so-called entertainers we have today. You did do them justice. judi
Comment from rrabinow
I like the line tap into rythem of life. Great syllable count for your poem. I enjoyed reading your poem, it was well written. Best of luck.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2014
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I like the line tap into rythem of life. Great syllable count for your poem. I enjoyed reading your poem, it was well written. Best of luck.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2014
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Thank you so much! It was a fun write so I am happy and grateful that you enjoyed it.
Comment from boxergirl
Great job with your 5/7/5 poem about Beatlemania. Alliteration of Liverpool lovelies. I like the line "tap into the rhythm of life". And, yes, they did rock the universe. 8-)
I did notice the no proper nouns on the rules. I don't know if they will ding you for Liverpool or not. But I like it, just the same! 8-)
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2014
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Great job with your 5/7/5 poem about Beatlemania. Alliteration of Liverpool lovelies. I like the line "tap into the rhythm of life". And, yes, they did rock the universe. 8-)
I did notice the no proper nouns on the rules. I don't know if they will ding you for Liverpool or not. But I like it, just the same! 8-)
Comment Written 11-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2014
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Thank you so much, BG! The contest sponsor clarified in the discussion thread that she meant the names of the guys only could not be used, but it really doesn't matter since I have been trounced regardless. I am happy you enjoyed it and grateful for your ongoing support and encouragement.
Comment from livelylinda
Mystic Angel 7777: a good contender for the contest. You have written a 5/7/5 without mentioning the Beattles or any of their songs. And, it is a great sentiment which brought a big smile on my face because they were so in touch with the world around them. Good job! livelylinda
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2014
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Mystic Angel 7777: a good contender for the contest. You have written a 5/7/5 without mentioning the Beattles or any of their songs. And, it is a great sentiment which brought a big smile on my face because they were so in touch with the world around them. Good job! livelylinda
Comment Written 11-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2014
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Thank you so much, Linda! It was worth the writing to simply bring that lovely smile to your face, I am very grateful for the kind encouragement and support.
Comment from kiwijenny
Yes and my personal favorite as a kid was WE ALL LIVE IN A YELLOW SUBMARINE! I don't know what that says about my rhythm of life...but at the time it rocked my universe...and it's so cute hearing preschool kids sing it
God bless....and good luck
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2014
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Yes and my personal favorite as a kid was WE ALL LIVE IN A YELLOW SUBMARINE! I don't know what that says about my rhythm of life...but at the time it rocked my universe...and it's so cute hearing preschool kids sing it
God bless....and good luck
Comment Written 11-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2014
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Thank you so much, Jenny! The Magical Mystery Tour was my personal mantra for a long time. Today, Hey Jude and Imagine are still two of my all time favorites. I am so happy you liked this and very grateful for the kind encouragement.
Comment from Jackarrie
This is a brilliant entry into the contest. Just the right words to describe it, I see this as a winner. Mary
a well deserved six.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2014
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This is a brilliant entry into the contest. Just the right words to describe it, I see this as a winner. Mary
a well deserved six.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2014
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Again, I thank you so much, Mary, as you truly do inspire me to keep scribbling away.
Comment from Smoothiecool
good luck in the contest
your syllable count spot on
your few words portray well how the Beatles rocked the world
good visual
good alliteration in "L" words
cheers Smoothiecool
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2014
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good luck in the contest
your syllable count spot on
your few words portray well how the Beatles rocked the world
good visual
good alliteration in "L" words
cheers Smoothiecool
Comment Written 11-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2014
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Thank you so much! I am so happy that you liked this and grateful for your kind words of encouragement.
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most welcome..SC Faye