Comment from Acquired Taste

Excellent

Very, very nice. Sweet and heartwarming - I can imagine sitting with a child, trying to cheer them up and pretending to be a mermaid and leaving all the trauma of the day behind.

So lovely and visual.

Best of luck. AT=/

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2014

Hello Acquired Taste :) Thank you so much for your lovely feedback and good luck wishes. Kindest regards, Debra :)

Comment from Judy Couch

Excellent

Excellent poem. It follows the prompt well. I like the rhyme and rhythm of it. I like the message it conveys. It would be a good one to read to a kid.

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2014

Thank you Judy for your great feedback :) Kindest regards...

Comment from Imogen JH

Excellent

Very good.

Nice easy reading light hearted verses. It takes you off for a ride. You pen this as children's poetry. Yes, it certainly fits into that category. I like the way you stretch the imagination from space to underwater with a fairytale between.The flow of the poem is lovely, really easy to read and follow.

Good luck in the competition.

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2014

Thank you Imogen for your great feedback and good luck wishes :) Much appreciated! Kindest regards...

Comment from Patti R.

Excellent

This is such a lovely and uplifting poem. Your rhyme and the meter are very good making for a wonderful read-aloud. Books are a fantastic way to open up the imagination and learn new things. I wish all kids read more. Good luck in the contest.

Patti

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2014

Hi Patti :) Thank you so much for your lovely feedback and good luck wishes, I appreciate both! Kindest regards...:)

Comment from sibhus

Excellent

Wow, this is so good and it really fits the prompt so well. I really liked the wonderfully rhymeing words that a paint a wonderland of adventure just waiting in a book. Well written piece that makes for a great entry to the contest. Good luck.

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2014

Hi Sibhus :) Thank you so much for your great feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Kindest regards...

Comment from livelylinda

Excellent

Author: you are so right! When you jump into a book, you can go so many different places you might never actually get to in real life. This poem is fun, exciting, fresh and original. Good luck in the contest. livelylinda

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2014

Hi livelylinda, thank you so much for your great feedback and good luck wishes! Kindest regards...:)

Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Hi Poet,

What a cute poem this is for the "Jump" contest. I've never read anything like this before and think it's really great. Keep up the good work and best wishes in the contest.

Kat

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2014

Thank you Kat for your great feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Kindest regards...:)

Comment from Bina1

Excellent

What a delight! A fine entry for the contest, good luck! A fine way to encourage reading, I'm all for that. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2014

Thank you so much for your lovely feedback and good luck wishes! Kindest regards...:)

Comment from RYME4U

Excellent

Very nicely done. Smooth and even rhythm and delightful rhymes.I love all the adventures you list and the descriptive fantasies are well done. Good job!

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2014

Thank you so much ryme4u for your great feedback :) Kindest regards...

Comment from zanya

Excellent

What better place to practice ones 'jump'skills than between the pages of a wonderful book and who knows where it can take us- interesting outlook

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2014

Thank you zanya for your great feedback. Kindest regards...:)