Let's Go Camping
The Hedgerow friends are bored.29 total reviews
Comment from Tanvi Pauddar
Awesome story. I really enjoyed reading it, and was fully into it. It was awesome! I liked that you made the main characters animals, instead of humans. Nice use of your imagination. I loved reading it a ton, and could read it over and over again, without getting bored.
:) -tanvi
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019
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Awesome story. I really enjoyed reading it, and was fully into it. It was awesome! I liked that you made the main characters animals, instead of humans. Nice use of your imagination. I loved reading it a ton, and could read it over and over again, without getting bored.
:) -tanvi
Comment Written 29-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019
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Thank you again for delving into my portfolio, Tanvi. The picture is of my characters, I think you can see who is who. :) Thank you so much for the six stars, and the amazing review!! Warm hugs, Sandra xxx
Comment from Hareem.S
This is a very good children's fiction you have penned down here. It is light and refreshing and the intersting dialogues kept me engaged till the end.
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2014
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This is a very good children's fiction you have penned down here. It is light and refreshing and the intersting dialogues kept me engaged till the end.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2014
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Thank you so much for your lovely review, Hareem.S. I am really pleased you enjoyed it! :) Sandra
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
I loved this delightful children's story.
What a lovely group of animal characters and a fun way to promote healthy lifestyle habits, friendship, sharing and co-operation.
A great image choice.
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2014
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I loved this delightful children's story.
What a lovely group of animal characters and a fun way to promote healthy lifestyle habits, friendship, sharing and co-operation.
A great image choice.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2014
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review of my children's story. I am really so pleased you enjoyed it. And a huge hug to the 6 stars!! :) Sandra.
Comment from emrpoems
Wonderful story for children and so appropriate for this time of year, that is Father's Day
Good use of dialogue and a truly enjoyable rad
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2014
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Wonderful story for children and so appropriate for this time of year, that is Father's Day
Good use of dialogue and a truly enjoyable rad
Comment Written 04-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2014
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Thank you very much, emrpoems, for your lovely review. I am so pleased you enjoyed my story! :) xsx Sandra
Comment from kiwijenny
I wish I had a six for this...it is adorable....I love the camping story with a daddy,...right here near Father's Day...I love the reality woven amongst the fantasy......mice and squirrel mole and vole all in a Van and tents....and the names are so adorable...especially Cyril ....:o)
God bless
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2014
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I wish I had a six for this...it is adorable....I love the camping story with a daddy,...right here near Father's Day...I love the reality woven amongst the fantasy......mice and squirrel mole and vole all in a Van and tents....and the names are so adorable...especially Cyril ....:o)
God bless
Comment Written 04-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2014
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LOL, Everyone loves Cyril! Thank you so much for your really wonderful review, it's worth double the 6 stars. :) I'm really chuffed that you enjoyed it. :) xsx Sandra
Comment from rhymelord
Dear Sandra,
Good yarn. Simple clear language and syntax. Excellent young kiddies' story. Long time since I have heard "tickity-boo". Just one small nit I'm afraid:
drove it round to the front of the house just as (the) every one arrived at the gate.
Drop the bracketed "(the)".
Regards
Reg
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2014
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Dear Sandra,
Good yarn. Simple clear language and syntax. Excellent young kiddies' story. Long time since I have heard "tickity-boo". Just one small nit I'm afraid:
drove it round to the front of the house just as (the) every one arrived at the gate.
Drop the bracketed "(the)".
Regards
Reg
Comment Written 04-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2014
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Thank you so much, Reg, for your lovely review. I'm really pleased you liked this children's story. The one 'nit' has gone! I have just been back and removed it, thank you so much for finding it. It doesn't matter how many times I go over my work, there are always some left that 'hide' from me! :) Sandra.
Comment from Selina Stambi
Hello, dear Ms. Potter/Enid Blyton,
I loved reading another critter story from you magic pen. As long as Sandra keeping writing her children's tales, my world remains a marvelous place, you know. :)
Love always,
Sonali
reached the (campsite).
water. It (could) be very dangerous if they
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2014
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Hello, dear Ms. Potter/Enid Blyton,
I loved reading another critter story from you magic pen. As long as Sandra keeping writing her children's tales, my world remains a marvelous place, you know. :)
Love always,
Sonali
reached the (campsite).
water. It (could) be very dangerous if they
Comment Written 03-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2014
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My dear Sonali, you always put a smile on my face, this time, you put a look of amazement on my face. Only TWO errors!!! How brilliant is that? I have been waiting for the long list of errors I knew you would find, and there was only two! I might at last be getting somewhere with my grammar! LOL. Thank you as always, my really lovely friend, for your lovely review. :) xx Sandra
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You've come a lon-ong way baby! xxx
Comment from Nosha17
That was a super kids' story, with lovable characters and cute story line. The dialogue was great and the narrative and descriptions excellent. Most enjoyable and lovely illustration. Faye
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2014
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That was a super kids' story, with lovable characters and cute story line. The dialogue was great and the narrative and descriptions excellent. Most enjoyable and lovely illustration. Faye
Comment Written 03-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2014
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Thank you so much for your lovely review, Faye, I am really pleased you enjoyed it. xsx Sandra :)
Comment from Laura everly
Let's Go Camping is a great kids story. absolutely loved it and could see the younger kids absolutely loving it. Would be a great story for kindergarten and 1st graders nice work fun story
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2014
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Let's Go Camping is a great kids story. absolutely loved it and could see the younger kids absolutely loving it. Would be a great story for kindergarten and 1st graders nice work fun story
Comment Written 03-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2014
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Thank you so much, Laura, for your wonderful review. I am so pleased you enjoyed my children's story. Thank you for reading it. :) Sandra
Comment from Dawn Munro
Oh Sandra, what a wonderful story for children! I read carefully, but the only tiny (possible) nit I found is this: "Reggie the Rat was the first to jump out of the van(;)..."<< I think that a semi-colon would go here, but honestly, I'm not completely sure - perhaps making this a sentence on its own would be better? (I'm afraid punctuation is my weakness...:( << but I tried...LOL)
Simply outstanding! Even though it's a story for children, I was completely engrossed. :)
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2014
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Oh Sandra, what a wonderful story for children! I read carefully, but the only tiny (possible) nit I found is this: "Reggie the Rat was the first to jump out of the van(;)..."<< I think that a semi-colon would go here, but honestly, I'm not completely sure - perhaps making this a sentence on its own would be better? (I'm afraid punctuation is my weakness...:( << but I tried...LOL)
Simply outstanding! Even though it's a story for children, I was completely engrossed. :)
Comment Written 03-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2014
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You carry on trying, my dear friend, I have changed it into a sentence on its own, it reads much better now, so big thank you for that. You are better at grammar than I am. LOL. A huge hug and thank you for your wonderful review and shiny 6 stars as well!! Thank you! xsx Sandra :)