Comment from nelliesellie

Excellent

I love the picture. I love the poem Living things do not always take change gracefully. Animals do not take the change of season gently. People go into changes sometimes fearful and act like idiots. Great work.

 Comment Written 22-May-2014

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reply by the author on 22-May-2014

Thanks for reviewing.

Comment from Jumbo J

Excellent

Hi...

I think the visual tells the story... then the six words drive it home... not the best foundations to the start union of a life-long relationship... all the very best in the contest... and maybe life in general?

With our thoughts we create,
an image,
James.

 Comment Written 21-May-2014

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reply by the author on 21-May-2014

Thanks for reviewing.

Comment from Smoothiecool

Excellent

good luck to the contest

your six words tell a lot about the beginning of a wedding day
not a good start

cheers..Smoothiecool

 Comment Written 21-May-2014

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reply by the author on 21-May-2014

Thanks for reviewing.

reply by Smoothiecool on 22-May-2014

welcome..SC

Comment from angel123

Excellent

Your poem is interesting and emotional. It flows and rhymes well and is humorous. Your artwork choice is also interesting.

angel123

 Comment Written 21-May-2014

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reply by the author on 21-May-2014

Thanks for reviewing.

Comment from donette1914

Excellent

Bride's constipated Grooms intoxicated Consummation contaminated. too funny! LOL wow you are to talented and what a fun piece well done

 Comment Written 20-May-2014

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reply by the author on 20-May-2014

Thanks for reviewing. Glad it gave you a chuckle.

Comment from livelylinda

Excellent

Author: what a great six word poem! It gave me the giggles and put a permanent smile on my face. An original idea for this contest. A good contender, for sure! livelylinda

 Comment Written 20-May-2014

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reply by the author on 20-May-2014

thanks for reviewing. Glad it gave you a laugh.