Comment from Glasstruth

Excellent

Really like this. A writer does chisel metaphors, stories & messages in a new way to excite. Your author notes just add to a little more depth. Superb! Les

 Comment Written 13-May-2014

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reply by the author on 15-May-2014

Thanks a lot Les for considering this superb. God bless.

Comment from donette1914

Excellent

very well written and so creative of the seed of creativity planted in their inner womb, very interesting thought and a well penned job well done

 Comment Written 12-May-2014

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reply by the author on 15-May-2014

Thanks a lot donette1914 for considering this very well written and so creative, I am deeply honored.

Comment from JavaJunkie

Excellent

This is a nice little senryu. Good structure with a great complimentary photo. I love the almost mixed metaphor between the writer and the sculptor. Chiseled brings a good mental image and reinforcement of your message.

 Comment Written 12-May-2014

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reply by the author on 15-May-2014

Thanks JavaJunkie for this warm, positive review and the five stars too. God bless.

Comment from nelliesellie

Excellent

I love the picture. I love the poem. Artists and poets are born. They are not created. They look at nature and people and see beyond the normal. They combine practical and emotions. Great work.

 Comment Written 12-May-2014

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reply by the author on 15-May-2014

Thanks a lot nelliesellie for considering this a great work. God bless.

Comment from persevere

Excellent

This art work is a magical ultrasonic depiction of a writer.Your senryu could also stand on its own. Your words are carefully chiselled and so meaningful.

 Comment Written 12-May-2014

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reply by the author on 15-May-2014

Thanks persevere for considering that my words are carefully chiselled. Thanks a bunch, God bless.

Comment from Righteous Riter

Excellent

writers are chisels
chipping age-old expressions
that excite anew
Good complimentary photo. The syllable count is correct. Good alliteration with chisels/chipping...expressions/excite. Clear message that is short and simple.

 Comment Written 12-May-2014

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reply by the author on 15-May-2014

Thanks a lot Righteous Riter for enjoying the read and thanks too, for the five stars. God bless.

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This is a senryu that brings the human aspect of creativity into sight with the allusion to the artist and a new creative venture. Nice.

 Comment Written 12-May-2014

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reply by the author on 15-May-2014

Thanks a lot Bill for considering this poem nice, thanks a bunch. God bless.

Comment from padumachitta

Excellent

Hi. Great picture. Great idea. I like the sculptor image..we are artists we sculpt language. Your poem is an example of that and a good one

 Comment Written 12-May-2014

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reply by the author on 15-May-2014

Thanks a lot padumachitta for considering this a good one and a great idea. Thanks a bunch, God bless.

Comment from seaglass

Excellent

I have though of writers being painters and potters. This a chisel, is a new metaphor for me. but it works. Nothing is ever new, just refashioned.

 Comment Written 11-May-2014

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reply by the author on 15-May-2014

Thanks a lot seaglass for considering the chisel to describe writers as a new metaphor. God bless.

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

SENRYU(WRITERS)

writers are chisels
chipping age-old expressions
that excite anew
I agree with you so much...chisels....are we....
Beautiful
God bless

 Comment Written 11-May-2014

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reply by the author on 15-May-2014

Thanks a lot, kiwijenny for considering my work beautiful. I am honored, God bless.