Reviews from

This is my life,

150 words

13 total reviews 
Comment from NicciFaye
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

I love how you wrote...life is good for me in the present...Indeed it should be for all of us that can reflect on how far we've come. A great 150 word spill!

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
    Thanks for the kind comments, in your review. Mary
Comment from Smoothiecool
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

good luck in the contest

you have told your story well with the images that allow the reader to see and feel this
flows well easy read

cheers Smoothiecool

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
    thanks for your kind review, Mary
reply by Smoothiecool on 21-Apr-2014
    most welcome..SC
Comment from Hadria
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Very well written indeed, to compress a life into 150 words is some challenge. I love the photo of you and your Dad. Every best wish for the Golden Wedding in August. Hadria

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 20-Apr-2014
    Thank you hadria, for the great review I appreciate it. Mary
Comment from Joan E.
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Thanks for adding the black and white photograph which helps to establish the tone. We are similar in age and interests (especially writing, painting and traveling) but I have a few more years to catch up to you--I've only been married for 42! As the contest required, you covered your whole life in very few words--no small feat. I am glad to hear that after the ups and downs of life, you are at a good place. Many hugs and best wishes in the contest- Joan

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 20-Apr-2014
    Thanks Joan for the great comments, I forgot to mention cooking, do you like that also. Mary
Comment from adewpearl
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Fifty years of marriage, congratulations!
You do a great job of hitting the highlights of your life along with some valleys.
I'm so glad that this part of your life is so good :-) Brooke
fantastic photo, by the way :-)

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 19-Apr-2014
    Thanks Brooke for the great review.I am pleased that you like it. Mary
Comment from Mike Battaglia
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Read this again, ma'am. This is your life, your epitaph. What YOU make of your own life; what matters most. It is beautiful. We all are no more than the sum of our experiences. That's what makes us who we are; what defines our lives. Yours reads beautifully.

:)
--Mike

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 19-Apr-2014
    Thanks Mike for a wonderful review I appreciate it. Mary
Comment from LoannaLois
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

I am so happy to read this of you...and you did such a great job! Astrology...how interesting and something about which I know nothing! You'll have to teach some of us! Good job with the great introduction to Jackarrie.

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 19-Apr-2014
    I have already put 5-7-5 poems of all the 12 signs. I may go over again with a different style of short poem. Thanks for the great review. Mary
Comment from Tomes Johnston
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

This is an absolutely fantastic and heartwarming picture of you and your dad. Well done on the writing and the complete short history of your life. Congratulations on the wedding anniversary.

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 19-Apr-2014
    Thank you Tomes, I really appreciate your review. Mary
reply by Tomes Johnston on 19-Apr-2014
    My pleasure
Comment from tbacha58
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Congratulations, for the golden wedding, so nice to share your life time with us, and that also shows what a courageous woman you were and still are. Beautiful writing. Hugs Terry xoxo

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
    Thanks Terry for the wonderful review and comments. Mary
Comment from maggieadams
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

You have such a positive outlook on life...spinal fusion surgery is no picnic...you have managed to go for the gusto and the golden anniversary. Congrats on a life well lived.

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
    Thank you Maggie, I also had my neck fused, and a hip operation. I am enjoying my life today and hope to for a long time to come. Mary
reply by maggieadams on 19-Apr-2014
    Good for you. Hope you can review my new chapter of my book, Are you My Mother?"