Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

I'm laughing my head off at your clever play on words - bet you can't find a woman alive who would not delight in this senryu. Clever and entertaining and also quite insightful in its observation :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014

Glad you enjoyed this. I hope I haven't offended to many men. Thank you~Debbie

Comment from Petriesan

Excellent

that age is? Is that what happened to Uncle Joe, why he was moving kind of slow at the Junction?

cute poem. . .

the picture is also interesting

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014

Thank you, my friend~Debbie

Comment from GracieAnn

Excellent

Debbie, this write is perfect in syllable and line count and is humorous that leads the reader to think one thing and is pleasantly surprised by the play on the word. Very cleverly done. :0 GracieAnn

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014

Thank you, my friend. Hopefully I didn't offend too many males~Debbie

Comment from Ramona Hughes

Excellent

Another Gem here! I love it! You have a very witty imagination. This form is interesting. I have never used it but after reading some of your excellent examples I think I will!

Ramona Hughes

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014

Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it. They are fun. I don't really 'try' to write them, but sometimes I am in a satirical mood and they just come to me~DEbbie

Comment from Deborah Marie

Excellent

You made me smile. Wonderful way of putting what we women go through. I giggled. "men-o-pause" is a clever spin on this topic. Thanks for sharing, Deb

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014

Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it~Debbie

Comment from krys123

Excellent

Debbie, I really don't know where you come up with these things but this is really funny. Chuckle! Chuckle! My wife even agrees that this was so funny. Thank you for sharing them posting this for others it may the good Lord be with you always.
Alex

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014

I think they are the product of a warped mind, but glad you both enjoyed this~Debbie

Comment from RGstar

Excellent

...And women worry.
So right,
I do not know as to the age, yet one has to keep going and not let thoughts become master of the mind, instead let actions be an equal partner.
Well done.
RGstar

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014

Thank you, my friend~Debbie

Comment from annp

Excellent

this is very funny
the age at which men slow down, I've not met that many that go quickly in the first place, lol
I do enjoy short and to the point
regards
annp

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014

Thank you and you have a very good point about men~Debbie

Comment from mumsyone

Excellent

men-o-pause
the age at which men
slow down

Good thinking, and very clever, Debbie. The artwork works well with it, too.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014

Thank you, my friend. Hopefully I didn't offend too many men. Hugs~Debbie

reply by mumsyone on 17-Apr-2014

I don't think the men on this site get offended too easily. Ha!

Hugs,
Lois

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

men-o-pause
the age at which men
slow down

LOL! Both genders do, I'm afraid. Old age is difficult but it beats the alternative, as they say. :)

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014

Thank you, my friend~Debbie