Prisoner of Your Eyes
Contest entry.6 total reviews
Comment from nelliesellie
I can not think of a better way to be a prisoner. I was one for thirty years to a pair of blue eyes. I did not even know what he looked like at first. We were pen pals at first. He could have looked like the hunch back of Norte Dame and he would have still looked beautiful to me. Great work. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2014
  |
I can not think of a better way to be a prisoner. I was one for thirty years to a pair of blue eyes. I did not even know what he looked like at first. We were pen pals at first. He could have looked like the hunch back of Norte Dame and he would have still looked beautiful to me. Great work. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2014
-
Thank you so much! I am so happy that you liked this and think it a worthy contest entry.
Comment from Erik McGinley
Out of the frying pan and into the fire, eh?
I liked your slant on the topic and the unexpected optimistic twist.
Nice story and nice ending.
GL in the comp :)
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2014
|
Out of the frying pan and into the fire, eh?
I liked your slant on the topic and the unexpected optimistic twist.
Nice story and nice ending.
GL in the comp :)
Comment Written 03-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2014
-
Thank you so much! Always burning in one way or another. I am happy that you liked this and think it a worthy contest entry.
Comment from lancellot
I have to say. I know what you mean. I think many of have been there once or twice in our lives when a pair of eyes or should I say what shined behind those eyes touched something deep within us and held tight.
Well done.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2014
|
I have to say. I know what you mean. I think many of have been there once or twice in our lives when a pair of eyes or should I say what shined behind those eyes touched something deep within us and held tight.
Well done.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2014
-
Thank you so much! I am very happy that you liked this and think it a worthy contest entry.
Comment from Cajungirl
A love story, how different, what a great play on the 'prisoner writing prompt'. Beautiful read. Scary eyes, but it gives the feeling of being drawn in. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2014
|
A love story, how different, what a great play on the 'prisoner writing prompt'. Beautiful read. Scary eyes, but it gives the feeling of being drawn in. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2014
-
Thank you so much! I am happy you liked this and feel I did the contest justice with a different spin on being a prisoner.
Comment from B. Diehl
This is a really rad short story. I have tried writing stories this short, so believe me, I know it is not as easy as it looks to write a complete story in so little words.
Well done.
-B<3
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2014
|
This is a really rad short story. I have tried writing stories this short, so believe me, I know it is not as easy as it looks to write a complete story in so little words.
Well done.
-B<3
Comment Written 02-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2014
-
Thank you so much! I am so thrilled you think it a decent contest entry since these never feel quite complete.
Comment from kiwijenny
Absolutely marvelous......beautiful thought ....beautiful response to the prompt...beautiful art work.
Love transcends
God bless I loved it
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2014
|
Absolutely marvelous......beautiful thought ....beautiful response to the prompt...beautiful art work.
Love transcends
God bless I loved it
Comment Written 02-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2014
-
Thank you so much! I am happy that I was able to do a decent job for this and that you liked the result.