Nature's Poetic Voice.
Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "Springtime."A sensory appreciation of nature.
7 total reviews
Comment from Treischel
You really bring out the essence of spring, the breathtaking beauty, the renewal of life, the feelings of love, and it's wonderful fragrances, all rolled up in this lovely aabb rhymed poem.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2013
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You really bring out the essence of spring, the breathtaking beauty, the renewal of life, the feelings of love, and it's wonderful fragrances, all rolled up in this lovely aabb rhymed poem.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2013
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Thank you.
I appreciate your time and generous review.
I guess I'm just so glad Winter is over. This is my favourite time of year.
Comment from krys123
Thank you for sharing this with your fans and other readers. Your picture, complements your poem very much anger rhyming couplet are done very well. The rhythm is done so well that it's easy for me to read your poem. The words are enlightening and vibrant just like the new spring. I enjoyed reading your poem very much. You have a good one in God bless.
AK.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2013
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Thank you for sharing this with your fans and other readers. Your picture, complements your poem very much anger rhyming couplet are done very well. The rhythm is done so well that it's easy for me to read your poem. The words are enlightening and vibrant just like the new spring. I enjoyed reading your poem very much. You have a good one in God bless.
AK.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2013
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Thank you for a positive review and comments.
I appreciate your continued support.
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You are so welcome seken58
Comment from Cookie333
Oh, what I wouldn't give to be entering spring again. We are in fall here in New Hampshire, and the crisp air and colors are quite nice, I just know I shall see the white stuff soon.
Great flow, perfect rhyme and a consistent theme made this one a joy to read,
thank you
karen
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2013
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Oh, what I wouldn't give to be entering spring again. We are in fall here in New Hampshire, and the crisp air and colors are quite nice, I just know I shall see the white stuff soon.
Great flow, perfect rhyme and a consistent theme made this one a joy to read,
thank you
karen
Comment Written 08-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2013
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Thank you for a positive review.
I appreciate your support and comments.
Shirley
Comment from tbacha58
Send mum a bouquet of love from you,
Remember to tell dad you love him too,
Give thanks to God for what he has given,
Rejoice in His love; your sins are forgiven
This verse I enjoyed reading it more this morning. Giving thanks has become a forgotten word. Enjoyed very much your poem. Terry
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2013
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Send mum a bouquet of love from you,
Remember to tell dad you love him too,
Give thanks to God for what he has given,
Rejoice in His love; your sins are forgiven
This verse I enjoyed reading it more this morning. Giving thanks has become a forgotten word. Enjoyed very much your poem. Terry
Comment Written 08-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2013
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Thanks for a generous review and comments. I appreciate your continued support.
I am glad that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Jean Lutz
Here on FanStory we are blessed with all seasons. Where I live autumn is waiting to make a brisk arrival but the muggy summer just keeps holding on. While your words bless with the freshness of springtime. Well done.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2013
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Here on FanStory we are blessed with all seasons. Where I live autumn is waiting to make a brisk arrival but the muggy summer just keeps holding on. While your words bless with the freshness of springtime. Well done.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2013
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Thank you for reading and reviewing.
I appreciate your continued support and positive feedback.
Comment from Sankey
Very nice poem. I wonder if you have seen my Spring poem, a funny rhyme elsewhere.
Went along nicely for me thanks very much. Loved the background and Artwork as well.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2013
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Very nice poem. I wonder if you have seen my Spring poem, a funny rhyme elsewhere.
Went along nicely for me thanks very much. Loved the background and Artwork as well.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2013
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Thanks so much.
I truly do appreciate your exceptional review and comments.
I will check out your profile soon- I just have a lot of family stuff happening at the moment and not enough time to review.
Thanks for understanding.
Comment from n.rosej.
I thought the subject for this poem was a nice idea. The poem flowed with iambic structure, and got across the 'feeling' of springtime and all that goes on, besides just flowers in bloom. Well written!
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2013
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I thought the subject for this poem was a nice idea. The poem flowed with iambic structure, and got across the 'feeling' of springtime and all that goes on, besides just flowers in bloom. Well written!
Comment Written 08-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2013
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Ok. A three.
This suggest a poor standard and a lot of improvement needed.
If this is indicated, AND IT'S NOT, please provide notes as to where these improvements are needed.
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I believe I gave it a 4 star rating, not a three, because as I said, i enjoyed the poem. This seems to be a problem on FanStory's end, in which I will contact and let them know. What IS however a turnoff, is YOUR attitude. I said nothing negative in my comment; yet you felt it necessary to be rude in your reply to me, and not even capable of saying thank you. I do not wish to be contacted by you again.
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I was not rude. I merely asked for clarification of your three star review which is within the Fanstory guidelines.
If I am to improve then I need constructive feedback.
But- that's fine-perhaps it is for the best.
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You in no way asked for 'constructive' feedback; you came across hostile, rude and annoyed because you didn't get the rating you wanted or expected. Kind of like a spoiled brat that can't get her way. You have a lot of trouble with criticism period, as well as with saying THANK YOU and IM SORRY. Now, I asked you twice, not to contact me again. According to Fan Story guidelines, I can report for harassment. Just remember; be kind to people in the future.