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True storiesof life loss and tragedy in this world
3 total reviews
Comment from
EMB
This reminded me of the joke of the priest who asks the congregation who want to go to heaven, and the people raise their hands. Then he lays a gun on the pulpit and asks, "Who wants to go now," and no hand goes up. :)
Comment Written 08-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2013
Ed,
After my kid and eight months later, my wife's death's,
that gun would have been used..
Ricky.
Comment from
tbacha58
"I hear it all from perfection to creation!
The pot boilith over and sometimes the "Happiness to the Fears"
almost brings Me to tears!
But, you know, I wouldn't have it any other way because when God
wrapped His arms around Me in 2003, He actually saved Me!
For me that was it, gracefully written, loved the poems depth. Terry"
Comment Written 06-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2013
Thanks baby!
I love you!!!
Ricky..
Comment from
CR Delport
This is a curious piece of writing that makes you think. I love that art work too. Just one question:
In order to make it her --- here???
Comment Written 06-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2013
Thanks,
Corrected and my brain damage
is salvaged Spock!
Ricky...
beaming up!
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