Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 97 "A Brain yada yada yada to Waste"Assorted poetry
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Comment from Lylise
I am not well versed in oriental poetry and know not what a renga is. (even after I looked it up) But I liked this poem because of the way it flowed and I enjoyed the content. Your art work goes well with this. ..toasting tumors in the brain... Ha! Well done. Lynda
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
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I am not well versed in oriental poetry and know not what a renga is. (even after I looked it up) But I liked this poem because of the way it flowed and I enjoyed the content. Your art work goes well with this. ..toasting tumors in the brain... Ha! Well done. Lynda
Comment Written 13-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
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Thank you, Lynda, for giving this a look. Bill
Comment from Sararb
A very interesting and uniquely different poem. I enjoyed reading it. A very well versed write. I enjoyed reading it. Sararb ;0
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2013
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A very interesting and uniquely different poem. I enjoyed reading it. A very well versed write. I enjoyed reading it. Sararb ;0
Comment Written 08-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2013
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Thank you for giving this one a look. Bill
Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT
Random lines telling random woes now how cool is that !! liked the call girl line the best never been there but heard from my friends who have done that WAIT IS THAT MY PHONE
RING RING YOU WANT HOW MUCH !! SORRY BILL GOTTA GO BUSINESS YOU KNOW hehehe
tk
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2013
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Random lines telling random woes now how cool is that !! liked the call girl line the best never been there but heard from my friends who have done that WAIT IS THAT MY PHONE
RING RING YOU WANT HOW MUCH !! SORRY BILL GOTTA GO BUSINESS YOU KNOW hehehe
tk
Comment Written 08-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2013
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Thank you, tk, for taking a look art this one. It may be too random to gel. I appreciate the kind review. Bill
Comment from rhonny
Very nicely done poem that covers a multitude in a fairly short time. It flows well and there is no forced rhyme pattern. Interesting artwork.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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Very nicely done poem that covers a multitude in a fairly short time. It flows well and there is no forced rhyme pattern. Interesting artwork.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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Thank you for your kind review. Bill
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Comment from krys123
Quite a different beast than I've ever read before. Is it like being brain on drugs? Nah! It can't be that. Rather your brain being toasted I will accept. I sense a little bit of paranoia about phones. Being that they toast your brains like a microwave. John may be true for someone who is paranoid. The last lines and verse is a little vague. Could I don't I don't find it in context with the rest of the other 2 versus. Is that it has a meaning within itself. Which I understand very well. That's what keeps me from giving you a six stars. You have a very good one in God bless.
AK
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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Quite a different beast than I've ever read before. Is it like being brain on drugs? Nah! It can't be that. Rather your brain being toasted I will accept. I sense a little bit of paranoia about phones. Being that they toast your brains like a microwave. John may be true for someone who is paranoid. The last lines and verse is a little vague. Could I don't I don't find it in context with the rest of the other 2 versus. Is that it has a meaning within itself. Which I understand very well. That's what keeps me from giving you a six stars. You have a very good one in God bless.
AK
Comment Written 07-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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I know the poem is a bit cerebral (no pun intended) and is set up on a love, phone, brain cycle within each stanza. Thank you for reviewing.
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You are welcome Bill. Thanks for sharing your poem.
AK
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You are welcome Bill