Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens

Excellent

Show me a sunset
Fill me with love
Let me remember
My God above.

Norm, this is one of my favorites, thank you for sharing. I hope you are doing well today, Carolyn

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2013

You are always too nice to me.

Norm

Comment from flippant

Excellent

I think this is an excellent example of free-verse - it doesn't feel stilted or clumsy at all. The images are very evocative - stanzas 4 & 5 in particular made me feel content.

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 31-Jul-2013

I like 4 and 5 the best.

Thanks,

Norm

Comment from angelmagnet

Excellent

The more joyfully you behave, the more you want to be joyful about. You seem to get that notion across to your readers. Good job

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 31-Jul-2013

Thanks for the fine review. I appreciate you thoughts.

Norm