Comment from 22allgood

Excellent

Good story. I've read these in your story 'The dog that wouldn't let go'. I understand why you haven't named the ladies or the places, that is very thoughtful of you.

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2013

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013

yeah I incorporated some of these probably should have done the same with this one instead of re-writing it...trouble is that make another chapter. Just got back from my big walk!

Comment from humpwhistle

Excellent

I like these stories, Sankey, but I wish you'd expand on them some. Give us some more detail. I know the stories are longer in your head. Maybe you can share more with the rest of us. Just a thought.

Peace, Lee

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2013

Hi Lee work on it ok I do have all the notes here. We had a fabulous time going through my dear old Mum's letters she wrote from Eritrea and Zaire and reading them brought a lot of memories ack. Thanks for the kick in the butt hehe.

Comment from DanielEkine

Excellent

Nice writing. I would suggest using a justified alignment.
My best part.
"First of all though, I need to explain that my Mum was a bit of a taxi driver for our church folks. This next story describes one of those occasions.This is a another remembrance of Miss C.
We were driving up the main road one day the two old sisters were in the back. "

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2013

Hi Justified alignment is that to the left or centre or... see you do know more than me some times hehe.
Thanks for the review.

reply by DanielEkine on 30-Jul-2013

there is left center right then justified. should be the last one.

reply by the author on 30-Jul-2013

Hi I just moved things a bit. have a look again and tell me what you think.

reply by DanielEkine on 30-Jul-2013

Looks better now.

reply by the author on 30-Jul-2013

ta I guess iuf I had used some of the Advanced editing could have done more of what you suggested.