Nature's Poetic Voice.
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "Flowers Bloom."A sensory appreciation of nature.
5 total reviews
Comment from Jean Lutz
Your writing, MoonWillow's artwork and a color scheme that hints of the gold of summer sun sure work together to deliver a delightful piece.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2013
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Your writing, MoonWillow's artwork and a color scheme that hints of the gold of summer sun sure work together to deliver a delightful piece.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2013
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Thanks so much . I appreciate your review and comments. I am proud of this one. MoonWillow's artwork is magical.
Comment from Sam Mendonca
Very nice 5-7-5 poem
Your wording tells a
story within it's self.
The photo you chose goes very well
with the poem.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2013
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Very nice 5-7-5 poem
Your wording tells a
story within it's self.
The photo you chose goes very well
with the poem.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2013
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Thank you for reading and reviewing I appreciate your five stars and comments
Comment from JB Lynn
"Sweet perfume drifts by." - This is a clever way of giving us the image of a flower waving in the wind, without ever having to mention the wind. You painted a lovely picture with words, which is exactly the point of a 5-7-5 poem. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2013
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"Sweet perfume drifts by." - This is a clever way of giving us the image of a flower waving in the wind, without ever having to mention the wind. You painted a lovely picture with words, which is exactly the point of a 5-7-5 poem. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2013
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Thank you for reviewing and commenting. I appreciate your time and your five stars.
Comment from l.raven
Hi Seken, This is such a pretty poem. And the picture is stunning. I love walking through a garden and smelling the different fragrance's. Very nicely written. Luff Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2013
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Hi Seken, This is such a pretty poem. And the picture is stunning. I love walking through a garden and smelling the different fragrance's. Very nicely written. Luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 25-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2013
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Thanks so much for your generous five star review and comments.
I wrote it and then I found the absolutely perfect pic on FanArtReview. Ilove it. It just fits the poem perfectly.
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Yes It does...xxoo
Comment from Gungalo
Sun shines down with warmth,
Flowers bloom in profusion.
Sweet perfume drifts by.
What a sweet 5/7/5 for your first one Seken. I love it girl.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2013
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Sun shines down with warmth,
Flowers bloom in profusion.
Sweet perfume drifts by.
What a sweet 5/7/5 for your first one Seken. I love it girl.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2013
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Thanks for stopping by to review so generously. I appreciate your five stars.
I wrote it and then I found the absolutely perfect pic on FanArtReview. I love it.
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Smile Seken.