I Choose Rainbows
Viewing comments for Chapter 57 "Disappeared"Thoughts from the dark side
2 total reviews
Comment from GaryCecil
This was fun!
It's confusing
No more jokes
No memories either
It's like the past has vaporized
Leaving only a wisp of a mist
My ears are driving me crazy
And I can't concentrate on anything
This part was great to make your story flow to the end!
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2013
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This was fun!
It's confusing
No more jokes
No memories either
It's like the past has vaporized
Leaving only a wisp of a mist
My ears are driving me crazy
And I can't concentrate on anything
This part was great to make your story flow to the end!
Comment Written 24-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2013
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I am really glad you found this fun. I was a bit worried.
Norm
Comment from SteveY
A very different concept and poem. Very creative use of your imagination and was able to put it in poetic form. Nice job just keep it up.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2013
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A very different concept and poem. Very creative use of your imagination and was able to put it in poetic form. Nice job just keep it up.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2013
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Hi: Thanks for the review. I have two more conversations to put up that are a little more oblique.
Norm