A Haiku (summer meadow)
A summer Haiku, kigo word and less than 17 syllables20 total reviews
Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart
Spring time is such a beautiful time when all the flowers come out. This is a very nice poem and very pleasant read. God loves you and so do I.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2013
Spring time is such a beautiful time when all the flowers come out. This is a very nice poem and very pleasant read. God loves you and so do I.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2013
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Thanks for your time and the nice rating. Have a lovely week, Ine
Comment from ann marie mazz
beautiful imagery and presentation
the theme is equally beautiful
you grace our mind with imagery
I cannot comment on format
I have yet to achieve this form
it looks easy however it is not
you achieved the syllable count of 17 or less
well done
thank you for sharing
ann marie
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
beautiful imagery and presentation
the theme is equally beautiful
you grace our mind with imagery
I cannot comment on format
I have yet to achieve this form
it looks easy however it is not
you achieved the syllable count of 17 or less
well done
thank you for sharing
ann marie
Comment Written 17-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
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Thanks for your time and the nice rating. Have a lovely week, Ine
Comment from Joan E.
I enjoyed your tiny poem and its vivid landscape image. Your artwork selection is surreal and complements your words well. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
I enjoyed your tiny poem and its vivid landscape image. Your artwork selection is surreal and complements your words well. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 16-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
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Thanks for your time and the nice rating. Have a lovely week, Ine
Comment from Cumbrianlass
Oh, how special is this to me, since I mentioned a summer meadow in my latest post! So simple, yet your haiku sets up a glorious image of colour.
Very nice indeed, Ine.
av
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
Oh, how special is this to me, since I mentioned a summer meadow in my latest post! So simple, yet your haiku sets up a glorious image of colour.
Very nice indeed, Ine.
av
Comment Written 16-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
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Thanks for your time and the nice rating. Have a lovely week, Ine
Comment from 9999pool
The meadows int he summer are filled and enchanted with wild flower of many breed and colors to brighten our happy days and moods.
Good write and well expressed in kigo word.
Cheerio, Ritchie :)) Hugs.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
The meadows int he summer are filled and enchanted with wild flower of many breed and colors to brighten our happy days and moods.
Good write and well expressed in kigo word.
Cheerio, Ritchie :)) Hugs.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
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Thanks for your time and the nice rating. Have a lovely week, Ine
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes this is well written my friend and really very beautiful you bring the photograph to life well done my friend I enjoyed regards Jill
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2013
Yes this is well written my friend and really very beautiful you bring the photograph to life well done my friend I enjoyed regards Jill
Comment Written 16-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2013
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Thanks for your time and the nice rating. Have a lovely week, Ine
Comment from adewpearl
lovely pairing of artwork and poem
you create a pretty picture in my mind as I imagine all those wildflowers :-) and your use of "summer" also puts me in a cheery mood
Brooke :-)
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2013
lovely pairing of artwork and poem
you create a pretty picture in my mind as I imagine all those wildflowers :-) and your use of "summer" also puts me in a cheery mood
Brooke :-)
Comment Written 16-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2013
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Thanks for your time and the nice rating. Have a lovely week, Ine
Comment from sunnilicious
That is a lovely kigo. And so pretty with such bright colors. The perfect pick-me-up even out of season. Nicely done. Excellent work.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2013
That is a lovely kigo. And so pretty with such bright colors. The perfect pick-me-up even out of season. Nicely done. Excellent work.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2013
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Thanks for your time and the nice rating. Have a lovely week, Ine
Comment from Tonulak
Dear Robina,
I think you missed the mark of what a classical haiku needs to do. You can read the thre lines here as a continuous sentence, where you should set up two lines of premises and a final conclusion of satori, or enlightenment. It's not just about the syllables. Read some more good haiku and think about it--Tedco
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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2013
Dear Robina,
I think you missed the mark of what a classical haiku needs to do. You can read the thre lines here as a continuous sentence, where you should set up two lines of premises and a final conclusion of satori, or enlightenment. It's not just about the syllables. Read some more good haiku and think about it--Tedco
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2013
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Thanks for your time and the nice rating. Have a lovely week, Ine
Comment from Hawaiian Mermaid
Aloha Robina,
A beautiful short poem filled with a summer meadow flowers, what a joy. The photo is a perfect companion to your poem. Thank you for sharing.
Aloha, Ginger
Hawaiian Mermaid
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2013
Aloha Robina,
A beautiful short poem filled with a summer meadow flowers, what a joy. The photo is a perfect companion to your poem. Thank you for sharing.
Aloha, Ginger
Hawaiian Mermaid
Comment Written 15-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2013
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Thanks for your time and the nice rating. Have a lovely week, Ine