I Choose Rainbows
Viewing comments for Chapter 69 "God The Creator"Thoughts from the dark side
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Comment from theomagee5
I had to give it to you. you deserved all six stars. GREAT POEM. Epic is a better term for this. it captured my attention from jump start. you've got a winner.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2013
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I had to give it to you. you deserved all six stars. GREAT POEM. Epic is a better term for this. it captured my attention from jump start. you've got a winner.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2013
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Blrss you my child. I appreviate the review.
Norm
Comment from zeldasmith
The only negative I have are the lines...He creates nothing from something and something from nothing....the second one is okay but the nothing/something doesn't make sense to me....with the first line do you mean he can make something just not be anymore? If so then you might word it differently: He can turn something into nothing---He can create something from nothing. That makes more sense. Just a thought. Other wise good job.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2013
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The only negative I have are the lines...He creates nothing from something and something from nothing....the second one is okay but the nothing/something doesn't make sense to me....with the first line do you mean he can make something just not be anymore? If so then you might word it differently: He can turn something into nothing---He can create something from nothing. That makes more sense. Just a thought. Other wise good job.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2013
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The chage has been made. Good going poet.
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Good!