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I Choose Rainbows

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Thoughts from the dark side

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Comment from zeldasmith
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Chronic depression is a terrible malady to live with. I had it for four years and I wanted to be me again....so I can relate to this poem good job. Keep writing my friend.

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2013

reply by the author on 12-Jul-2013
    I left my muse in San Francisco. I am trying to find her.

    Norm
reply by zeldasmith on 12-Jul-2013
    Is that the same as: I LEFT MY HEART IN SAN FRANCISCO....lol.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2013
    You got it.

    Writer's Block

    Why can't I write
    Like I wrote before
    About dreams and screams
    And loves galore

    Where is the rythm
    Where is the rhyme

    I am stuck
reply by zeldasmith on 12-Jul-2013
    Doesn't sound like writers block to me!
Comment from theomagee5
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

You deserve six stars my friend. The poem was emotional and loud. I felt every verse. The occasional rhyming was on point. Bravo to you

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2013

reply by the author on 10-Jul-2013
    You are the greatest. Depression is awful.

    Norm
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
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Very soulful and honestly expressed and quite accurate.
A family member suffered from depression and attemted suicuide and many of the emotions and thoughts you have expressed he had felt too.
Well written in a fluent free-flowing style.

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2013

reply by the author on 10-Jul-2013
    Thanks for the kind review. Depression is awful but I am better now.

    Norm