And then there's Grace
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Harvest"A collection of Spirtual poems
75 total reviews
Comment from sholessjo
You are good. Iove youR words and I see what you are talking about when you mention pictures. It really does a lot for a poem.
Norm
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2013
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You are good. Iove youR words and I see what you are talking about when you mention pictures. It really does a lot for a poem.
Norm
Comment Written 01-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2013
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Thank you Norm. Have a great 4th. :-) Carolyn
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
This poem is most enjoyable and inspirational. I enjoyed reading your sweet prayer of love from the Lord who uses every grain of wheat and every speck of dust to advantage. Giddy
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2013
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This poem is most enjoyable and inspirational. I enjoyed reading your sweet prayer of love from the Lord who uses every grain of wheat and every speck of dust to advantage. Giddy
Comment Written 29-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2013
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How nice of you to comment in the manner that you did. Thank you Giddy, Carolyn
Comment from country ranch writer
YOU REAP WHAT YOU SOW AND YOU GET OUT OF LIFE WHAT YOU PUT INTO IT NOTHING MORE NOTHING LESS IT IS UP TO YOU TOMAKE YOUR OWN HAPPINESS
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2013
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YOU REAP WHAT YOU SOW AND YOU GET OUT OF LIFE WHAT YOU PUT INTO IT NOTHING MORE NOTHING LESS IT IS UP TO YOU TOMAKE YOUR OWN HAPPINESS
Comment Written 29-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2013
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Isn't that the truth! Thanks so much, Carolyn
Comment from Glasstruth
You capture the beauty of harvesting, and how the land is worked is by togetherness. A community is what makes it happen. The line thats says it all: "The time to sow, the time to reap, in time, life's work is done." Great job! Les
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2013
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You capture the beauty of harvesting, and how the land is worked is by togetherness. A community is what makes it happen. The line thats says it all: "The time to sow, the time to reap, in time, life's work is done." Great job! Les
Comment Written 29-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2013
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I appreciate your comments on this one, Les, Thank you, Carolyn
Comment from 4hisglory
I enjoyed it very much! It is disheartening though when you keep sharing the love of God with people and they keep rejecting it, especially family members. But I keep on telling them anyway and one day will be the harvest!
Hopefully your poem will encourage others to more diligently spread the Word. Very good poem for the contest. Blessings, LaVonne
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2013
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I enjoyed it very much! It is disheartening though when you keep sharing the love of God with people and they keep rejecting it, especially family members. But I keep on telling them anyway and one day will be the harvest!
Hopefully your poem will encourage others to more diligently spread the Word. Very good poem for the contest. Blessings, LaVonne
Comment Written 28-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2013
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Thank you LaVonne, yes the greatest sorrow is the disinterest in His Word, by which we will be judged. But when we have done all we can, and must,then we stand as individuals before His throne. Obedience is the key. Blessings back to you, have a great weekend. Carolyn
Comment from Roblac
I really enjoyed this piece of work and the message really comes through.
It is a well written piece of work.
All the best for the future.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2013
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I really enjoyed this piece of work and the message really comes through.
It is a well written piece of work.
All the best for the future.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2013
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Thank you for the wonderful review, the best to you as well. Carolyn
Comment from AlvinTEthington
An excellent poem. The rhyming couplets can give the poem a lilting tone, but it doesn't quite get there. As I often say when I teach religion on the college level, God doesn't play favorites. You illustrate that well here. I like your emphasis on Grace. You illustrate well that the only way to have faith in God's grace is to show it to others and not hoard it.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2013
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An excellent poem. The rhyming couplets can give the poem a lilting tone, but it doesn't quite get there. As I often say when I teach religion on the college level, God doesn't play favorites. You illustrate that well here. I like your emphasis on Grace. You illustrate well that the only way to have faith in God's grace is to show it to others and not hoard it.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2013
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I appreciate all that you have said, thank you so much, Carolyn
Comment from Spitfire
Great word choices to reinforce the metaphor of how our lives are God's harvest: planted with love, given rain to bloom and multiply. Good transition from the earthly life to that above. Well done, Carolyn. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2013
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Great word choices to reinforce the metaphor of how our lives are God's harvest: planted with love, given rain to bloom and multiply. Good transition from the earthly life to that above. Well done, Carolyn. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2013
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Thanks Shari, I am glad you read and commented. I always appreciate you. Carolyn
Comment from trevorletang
A beautifully written poem and a beautiful message shared. I like your colour scheme and the picture. Very refreshing which just enhances the flavour of this tasteful piece
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2013
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A beautifully written poem and a beautiful message shared. I like your colour scheme and the picture. Very refreshing which just enhances the flavour of this tasteful piece
Comment Written 28-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2013
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What a nice review, thank you so much. Carolyn
Comment from emjaihammond
I did very much enjoy this poem of yours. Such a wonderful creation full of the knowledge and the power of God's promises and love. So nice to see a poem like this.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2013
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I did very much enjoy this poem of yours. Such a wonderful creation full of the knowledge and the power of God's promises and love. So nice to see a poem like this.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2013
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I am glad you liked 'Harvest', Thank you, Carolyn