Comment from christianpowers

Excellent

A very strange and interesting Norse myth you've woven here, my friend. I enjoyed it.

There was at least one instance of spag, but I was too interested in reading to note it (or them) and now I can't find them. lol

Anyway, great job on this, and good luck in the contest. I've got a piece entered in this one, too, but, since I can't vote for mine I'm voting for yours.

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2013

Thank you for the review and vote, very much appreciated and I'm glad you liked it.

Comment from Carolyn H

Excellent

A fine story, with a vivid portrayal of time and place. It has the real quality of legend and could easily be part of a longer saga. Gripping and thoroughly readable - thanks!

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2013

Thanks for the great review. This was originally 4500 words and I would loved to have made it longer, but it was limited to 3000 words. I really appreciate your time. Thanks and I'm glad you liked it.

Comment from Sam Mendonca

Excellent

Great storyline with very descriptive and expressions written by the author.

I enjoyed the way you worked the characters in your story.


Well done. :D

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2013

Thank you for the kind words and review. I'm glad you liked it.