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Comment from Razz
Hi Jaq Cee,
Very cute little diddy.
Nicely written.
Wonderfully expressed.
I do not know who Indie is, nor do I know what a jewish nun is...unless you are speaking about someone who convertaded from Judaism to Catholicism. Otherwise, I am at a complete loss. Or maybe it is some kind of inside joke. Neither here nor there.
Good writing.
Have a wonderful day.
Razz
reply by the author on 10-May-2013
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Hi Jaq Cee,
Very cute little diddy.
Nicely written.
Wonderfully expressed.
I do not know who Indie is, nor do I know what a jewish nun is...unless you are speaking about someone who convertaded from Judaism to Catholicism. Otherwise, I am at a complete loss. Or maybe it is some kind of inside joke. Neither here nor there.
Good writing.
Have a wonderful day.
Razz
Comment Written 10-May-2013
reply by the author on 10-May-2013
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Thanks so much Razz xxx
Comment from ravenblack
wish I had a six! great use of indie-style wit, rhythm and rhyme. I know I will sure miss a fellow truth-talker. there is not one time I did not look forward to reading her scalpel-sharp wit.
reply by the author on 10-May-2013
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wish I had a six! great use of indie-style wit, rhythm and rhyme. I know I will sure miss a fellow truth-talker. there is not one time I did not look forward to reading her scalpel-sharp wit.
Comment Written 10-May-2013
reply by the author on 10-May-2013
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I'm with you there ravenblack and thanks for the huge compliment on my poem. I've told Tom I'm off too, as are some others. Thanks again for reviewing :) Jaq xx
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don't leave too! we need to keep the sanity here.
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The site credibility is shot to pieces. There are some lovely people on here too. xx
Comment from mikenbel
What? She is leaving? But why? I've only been here a couple months, but what I've seen I love. Very well written poem, by the way!
reply by the author on 10-May-2013
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What? She is leaving? But why? I've only been here a couple months, but what I've seen I love. Very well written poem, by the way!
Comment Written 10-May-2013
reply by the author on 10-May-2013
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Ahhh it's a long story mikenbel, but she outed someone who was asking people to vote for him in contests and she ended up blocked and her poems were trashed by Tom. The person she outed is still on the site posting with impunity. :( I'll miss her witty and feisty poems. Thanks for your review. :) Jaq xx
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How is that right. Isn't there some administrative body to rectify the injustice?
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It was the site owner who was given the proof :( . Methinks Indie is too hard for him to handle and he's quite happy not to have her posting.
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Hi Jaq,
Well penned and a delight to see some more wit and wise cracks as this has great rhythm and rhyme too:)
Thanks for sharing, excellent post.
Maureen
reply by the author on 10-May-2013
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Hi Jaq,
Well penned and a delight to see some more wit and wise cracks as this has great rhythm and rhyme too:)
Thanks for sharing, excellent post.
Maureen
Comment Written 09-May-2013
reply by the author on 10-May-2013
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Cheers Maureen always a pleasure to hear your thoughts, hugs
Jaq xxx
Comment from Dawn Munro
A resounding YES to this fabulous, witty poem and to its message. If I had a six left, you'd most certainly have it for this one. Great rhyme too.
reply by the author on 10-May-2013
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A resounding YES to this fabulous, witty poem and to its message. If I had a six left, you'd most certainly have it for this one. Great rhyme too.
Comment Written 09-May-2013
reply by the author on 10-May-2013
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Thanks Dawn I am grateful for your support :) Jaq xx
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My pleasure.
Comment from Pili Pubul
I am so thrill that you wrote this excellent poem indie style, direct an honest. I feel that Fanstory lost a very talented ,witty , direct, honest great poet with a gold heart. She will be missed so much by so many. Pili
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I am so thrill that you wrote this excellent poem indie style, direct an honest. I feel that Fanstory lost a very talented ,witty , direct, honest great poet with a gold heart. She will be missed so much by so many. Pili
Comment Written 09-May-2013
reply by the author on 10-May-2013
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I'm glad to be able to put it over as Indie might. She's a special lady
gracias chica xx
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De nada Chico . Pili
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I'm a chica , Pili ;) xxx
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Ok chica...LOL
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LOL Pili :) xx
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OLE!
Comment from Ekim777
A fascinating read. I used to meet with a fellow poet, a one time practicing Jew who converted to become Head of a Carmelite Monastery. What is the similarity? What impressed me was his humanity, his openness and his sense of humor. For his Doctorate, he wrote a thesis on the love poems of Rilke. In spite of his very human contradictions he was a noble man with a poetic soul and that was the common ground of our relationships though I don't pretend to emulate him.
-Ekim777
reply by the author on 09-May-2013
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A fascinating read. I used to meet with a fellow poet, a one time practicing Jew who converted to become Head of a Carmelite Monastery. What is the similarity? What impressed me was his humanity, his openness and his sense of humor. For his Doctorate, he wrote a thesis on the love poems of Rilke. In spite of his very human contradictions he was a noble man with a poetic soul and that was the common ground of our relationships though I don't pretend to emulate him.
-Ekim777
Comment Written 09-May-2013
reply by the author on 09-May-2013
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Thanks for your wonderful review Ekim..Much appreciated. :) Jaq x
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Jaq,
I think you summed this sassy lass up perfectly...with Rhyme and flow in Indie style...to Tell the truth I don't know what all this petty goings on are about...Indie's a born writer...she may poke or prod a tad, but where's the harm...where's The foul? How many smiles has she brought to a site full of gloom and dark revelations? To the small minded people on this site who can't take the heat...don't start the fire and wonder why you arse is burning...a writing site is just that...to Write...and yes there are lines that can be crossed...but one sided justice turns thinking minds sour...thanks for a beautiful descriptive write...and to all that hold this beautiful and talented lady in their hearts...get to the bottom of what's going on...it could be you next! Loyalty is a quality that can't be bought and sold, you need the heart and soul to back it up and Indie has that in spades...don't lose the smiles lose the fakes!!!!
Kindest thoughts,
James xx
reply by the author on 09-May-2013
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Hi Jaq,
I think you summed this sassy lass up perfectly...with Rhyme and flow in Indie style...to Tell the truth I don't know what all this petty goings on are about...Indie's a born writer...she may poke or prod a tad, but where's the harm...where's The foul? How many smiles has she brought to a site full of gloom and dark revelations? To the small minded people on this site who can't take the heat...don't start the fire and wonder why you arse is burning...a writing site is just that...to Write...and yes there are lines that can be crossed...but one sided justice turns thinking minds sour...thanks for a beautiful descriptive write...and to all that hold this beautiful and talented lady in their hearts...get to the bottom of what's going on...it could be you next! Loyalty is a quality that can't be bought and sold, you need the heart and soul to back it up and Indie has that in spades...don't lose the smiles lose the fakes!!!!
Kindest thoughts,
James xx
Comment Written 09-May-2013
reply by the author on 09-May-2013
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Well said James. Indie won't be the last to be treated this way. It's the disparity of treatment that's so bloody annoying. Cheers for a brilliant and supportive review. love Jaq xx
Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart
Maybe because I'm 86 year old I've missed being exposed to the spoiled brats that want their own way and are so insecure that have to tear another down. Since I'm Indie's online mum I'm very unhappy about the bullying going on. God doesn't smile at "UGLY" and this stuff is ugly. Very nicely written tribute. God loves you and so do I.
reply by the author on 09-May-2013
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Maybe because I'm 86 year old I've missed being exposed to the spoiled brats that want their own way and are so insecure that have to tear another down. Since I'm Indie's online mum I'm very unhappy about the bullying going on. God doesn't smile at "UGLY" and this stuff is ugly. Very nicely written tribute. God loves you and so do I.
Comment Written 09-May-2013
reply by the author on 09-May-2013
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Thank you Evelyn it is sad indeed. Your review is appreciated, God bless, Jaq xx
Comment from Siouxsun
Never knew there was such a thing as a Jewish nun...The things you learn here! Not sure where she is going but I think many share your sentiment.
reply by the author on 09-May-2013
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Never knew there was such a thing as a Jewish nun...The things you learn here! Not sure where she is going but I think many share your sentiment.
Comment Written 09-May-2013
reply by the author on 09-May-2013
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Lol Siouxsun it's an alter ego for fun only. Thanks for your review xx