My Life in words
Viewing comments for Chapter 45 "Michaela."All of my poems of release.
12 total reviews
Comment from GarthL
A very beautiful tribute to an obviously very beautiful daughter who is now making her way in the big world with the sound foundation of love and support you have given her. I'm sure she will be most taken by your love poem to her, very well done. StaySafe, Garth
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
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A very beautiful tribute to an obviously very beautiful daughter who is now making her way in the big world with the sound foundation of love and support you have given her. I'm sure she will be most taken by your love poem to her, very well done. StaySafe, Garth
Comment Written 07-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
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Thank you so much Garth she is indeed forging ahead with her life xx
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Cheers mate, glowing and thriving I'd think!!!
Comment from mruss1
This quite exceptoinal and the best part is it comes straight from the heart. I must be rubbing offf on you hope it didn't leave a mark:)Great job really loved it:) Mark
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2013
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This quite exceptoinal and the best part is it comes straight from the heart. I must be rubbing offf on you hope it didn't leave a mark:)Great job really loved it:) Mark
Comment Written 07-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2013
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Awww thanks Mark, it's great to hear from you again :) xx
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I am not a critic but can speak of what I like. I think it is key to be honest with yourself and say what you feel inside your heart. This I think you did quite superbly and this is the foundation to a great poem. Take care and keep fighting the good fight it does make a difference:) Mark
Comment from nancyjam
Your daughter is beautiful and you
have written such a beautiful poem
to honor her.
Mothers and daughters have a special bond.
Strong rhyme and meter make this a
pleasure to read.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2013
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Your daughter is beautiful and you
have written such a beautiful poem
to honor her.
Mothers and daughters have a special bond.
Strong rhyme and meter make this a
pleasure to read.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2013
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review :) Jaq x
Comment from MM lives on :)
wow, she is such a cutie and I am sure the light of your life my dear friend. what a dedication of love and keep the love going as once they grow up they are GOING!
BRAVO!
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
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wow, she is such a cutie and I am sure the light of your life my dear friend. what a dedication of love and keep the love going as once they grow up they are GOING!
BRAVO!
Comment Written 06-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
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Thank you once again Christopher she is indeed. She was married 2 months ago, she's 21 now. I do miss her but I know she has to fly on her own xxx
Comment from reconciled
Dr. Quinn Medicine woman....first time heard that name...fell in love with it -wink- as well as Dr. Quinn...-smile- Wonderful tribute to your daughter mom... she certainly takes after you...in beauty...Great write Jaq love you Michael
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
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Dr. Quinn Medicine woman....first time heard that name...fell in love with it -wink- as well as Dr. Quinn...-smile- Wonderful tribute to your daughter mom... she certainly takes after you...in beauty...Great write Jaq love you Michael
Comment Written 06-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
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Awww thanks so much Michael, love ya guy xxx
Comment from Gungalo
She is indeed beautiful JC and what a picture you now have of her. Your dedication to her is lovely girl. Especially this:
It's hard to grasp. I'm left amazed!
I made you - you're perfection!
You light up even my darkest days,
yet you're of my conception.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
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She is indeed beautiful JC and what a picture you now have of her. Your dedication to her is lovely girl. Especially this:
It's hard to grasp. I'm left amazed!
I made you - you're perfection!
You light up even my darkest days,
yet you're of my conception.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
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She is so deserving of all of life's good things.Gungalo. Thanks for a beautiful review xxx
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She certainly is girl.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written , jaq cee, you did an excellent job writing this poetic story about the daughter who gave you a purpose in life. i enjoyed reading it. she's beautiful
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
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this is very well written , jaq cee, you did an excellent job writing this poetic story about the daughter who gave you a purpose in life. i enjoyed reading it. she's beautiful
Comment Written 06-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
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Much appreciated SWJ she is a special girl indeed xxx
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes this is well written my friend there nothing like a mothers bond and you have expressed this here very well I enjoyed well done regards Jill
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
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Yes this is well written my friend there nothing like a mothers bond and you have expressed this here very well I enjoyed well done regards Jill
Comment Written 06-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
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Thank you so very much Jill my friend xxx
Comment from Adri7enne
What a beautiful tribute to a beloved child. It's a wonderful, supportive kind of love, that of a mother for her child.
Well done, with good rhymes and near-rhymes and good steady rhythm. A pleasant, easy read. Well done, JaqCee.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
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What a beautiful tribute to a beloved child. It's a wonderful, supportive kind of love, that of a mother for her child.
Well done, with good rhymes and near-rhymes and good steady rhythm. A pleasant, easy read. Well done, JaqCee.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
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Thanks for a wonderful review Adri7enne. Much appreciated xx
Comment from Rondeno
If only I had a six to give (or a ten, for that matter!) So many people write about maternal love, but so few find a fresh, sincere way to say it! This one is a gem.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
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If only I had a six to give (or a ten, for that matter!) So many people write about maternal love, but so few find a fresh, sincere way to say it! This one is a gem.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
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Thank you so much for everything Miguel mi encanta :) xx