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Comment from adewpearl
solid rhyming couplets
effective imagery of prozac as bottled sunshine
I like the proximate rhyme of the alliterative placid/passive
strong social commentary on the over-medication that runs rampant in our society
Brooke
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2013
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solid rhyming couplets
effective imagery of prozac as bottled sunshine
I like the proximate rhyme of the alliterative placid/passive
strong social commentary on the over-medication that runs rampant in our society
Brooke
Comment Written 25-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2013
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Thank you so very much Brooke xx
Comment from Creative77
What a powerful poem! Your emotions are honest and valid. I especially like the ending. You did an excellent job expressing your feelings.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2013
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What a powerful poem! Your emotions are honest and valid. I especially like the ending. You did an excellent job expressing your feelings.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2013
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Thank you Creative77, much appreciated. :) Jaq xx
Comment from GarthL
Fantastic Jaq and with so much truth. I've seen the negative impacts that Big Pharma has on people and in fact have had many people join my meditation classes in their search for more holistic answers than the dangerous popping of pills. It's an unfortunate fact that Big Pharma reaps Big Profits from so many of their supposed solutions and many of these drugs are dangerous in the extreme. Very well done for highlighting this as it may make some think twice before listening to these puppet doctors.
The father of modern medicine said "Make a habit of two things. To help or at least to do no harm." Seems many in the profession forgot the second part!?!
Beautifully presented Jaq, take care, Garth
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2013
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Fantastic Jaq and with so much truth. I've seen the negative impacts that Big Pharma has on people and in fact have had many people join my meditation classes in their search for more holistic answers than the dangerous popping of pills. It's an unfortunate fact that Big Pharma reaps Big Profits from so many of their supposed solutions and many of these drugs are dangerous in the extreme. Very well done for highlighting this as it may make some think twice before listening to these puppet doctors.
The father of modern medicine said "Make a habit of two things. To help or at least to do no harm." Seems many in the profession forgot the second part!?!
Beautifully presented Jaq, take care, Garth
Comment Written 24-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2013
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Thanks for that Garth it's all about money not caring PeacenLove Jaq xx
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Cheers mate, well presented and very valid!!!
Comment from JeanneHP
Loved it! You expressed very well my own feeling on so many of these pills they pass out. I like the rhyming and the cadance to it. Good work! Good luck!
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2013
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Loved it! You expressed very well my own feeling on so many of these pills they pass out. I like the rhyming and the cadance to it. Good work! Good luck!
Comment Written 24-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2013
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Thanks for your lovely review :) Jaq xx
Comment from reconciled
That's right Jaq....I love the way I feel...on valium...truth....for the first week I am ...invincible...nothing shakes me....then...week two...I need twice as much...to get there...soon....I'm eaten em like they were coming out a pez dispenser. Then I start doing stuff...I would not normaly do. I can always tell now...when I see someone...taking them. Yes....it is a lie...a false hope...that will kill you eventually. Go for you girl...I did the samr thing. you rock love you Michael
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2013
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That's right Jaq....I love the way I feel...on valium...truth....for the first week I am ...invincible...nothing shakes me....then...week two...I need twice as much...to get there...soon....I'm eaten em like they were coming out a pez dispenser. Then I start doing stuff...I would not normaly do. I can always tell now...when I see someone...taking them. Yes....it is a lie...a false hope...that will kill you eventually. Go for you girl...I did the samr thing. you rock love you Michael
Comment Written 24-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2013
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Wow thanks so much for this wonderful review and fantastic rating Michael love n hugs xx
Comment from Jacq77
This was excellent. And sadly, it is also very true. It seems doctors are all too quick to write out a script for some chemical pill which is supposed to "fix" you. But you end up with awful side-effects, which they then want to give you more pills for. And so it goes on...
Very well done with superb poem. Your descriptive writing was very clever and told the story well. Well written - well done!
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2013
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This was excellent. And sadly, it is also very true. It seems doctors are all too quick to write out a script for some chemical pill which is supposed to "fix" you. But you end up with awful side-effects, which they then want to give you more pills for. And so it goes on...
Very well done with superb poem. Your descriptive writing was very clever and told the story well. Well written - well done!
Comment Written 24-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2013
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Thanks once again for a lovely review Jacq xx
Comment from Indie Skreet
first class presentation again, in a brilliant poem that so many will relate too. well done Jaq and keep them coming girl :), luv'n'hugs, Indie xx
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2013
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first class presentation again, in a brilliant poem that so many will relate too. well done Jaq and keep them coming girl :), luv'n'hugs, Indie xx
Comment Written 24-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2013
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Thanks for the pointers earlier girlie. Always appreciate your input xxx
Comment from Rondeno
What an unusual theme! I have to say, I agree completely. Too many people are kept subdued by the chemical "liquid cosh" when the motives for prescribing the stuff are questionable. Intelligent poetry.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2013
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What an unusual theme! I have to say, I agree completely. Too many people are kept subdued by the chemical "liquid cosh" when the motives for prescribing the stuff are questionable. Intelligent poetry.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2013
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Thank you so much for your very kind review once again. Jacqueline xxx
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Hello my friend I was on anti depressants but felt I could manage without them and I do this is very well written my friend and good advice well done regards Jill
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2013
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Hello my friend I was on anti depressants but felt I could manage without them and I do this is very well written my friend and good advice well done regards Jill
Comment Written 24-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2013
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Thanks once again Jill, it's always a pleasure to hear your thoughts. :) xx