And then there's Grace
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Shepherd"A collection of Spirtual poems
17 total reviews
Comment from Nebukadneser
Brilliant! Brilliant! Brilliant! What a beautiful tribute to the shepherd of all shepherds, the king of kings our sacrificial lamb who died on the cross for us. You summarized the Lord so beautifully in this ode to his heart of a shepherd.
Well done
you rock, me girl
Cool bananas and warm regards
Nebukadneser
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2013
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Brilliant! Brilliant! Brilliant! What a beautiful tribute to the shepherd of all shepherds, the king of kings our sacrificial lamb who died on the cross for us. You summarized the Lord so beautifully in this ode to his heart of a shepherd.
Well done
you rock, me girl
Cool bananas and warm regards
Nebukadneser
Comment Written 17-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2013
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Thank you for the 'exuberant' review :-) Thanks for the 6 stars. The poem was a joy to write. Carolyn
Comment from EMB
This was a terrific poem, Carolyn. You did a great job expressing all that He means to you and how you belong to him, and you did it with a challenging format and a creative word.
Well done. :)
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2013
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This was a terrific poem, Carolyn. You did a great job expressing all that He means to you and how you belong to him, and you did it with a challenging format and a creative word.
Well done. :)
Comment Written 16-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2013
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Thank you for your wonderful review and rating. I am glad you liked it. Carolyn
Comment from Gypsy Starchild
A delightful acrostic. It reads well, I enjoyed it greatly. Thank you very much for sharing and best of luck in the contest.:)
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2013
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A delightful acrostic. It reads well, I enjoyed it greatly. Thank you very much for sharing and best of luck in the contest.:)
Comment Written 16-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2013
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Thank you for the comments.. Best to you always. Carolyn
Comment from Titanx9
What more can I add to this delightful acrostic that give such a resounding tribute to our Lord and Savior. I enjoyed it very much.
Sinless was He
Holy example to me
Eternal in existence
Patience personified
Heaven's mansions design
Everlasting Son-shine
Reigns in Glory
Delighted to be His
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2013
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What more can I add to this delightful acrostic that give such a resounding tribute to our Lord and Savior. I enjoyed it very much.
Sinless was He
Holy example to me
Eternal in existence
Patience personified
Heaven's mansions design
Everlasting Son-shine
Reigns in Glory
Delighted to be His
Comment Written 16-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2013
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I appreciate your review, It is always a joy to write about the Lord. Carolyn
Comment from Gungalo
A beautiful acrostic poetry which talks of our Savior Jesus Christ and His Reign of Glory.
Sinless was He
Holy example to me
Eternal in existence
Patience personified
Heaven's mansions design
Everlasting Son-shine
Reigns in Glory
Delighted to be His
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2013
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A beautiful acrostic poetry which talks of our Savior Jesus Christ and His Reign of Glory.
Sinless was He
Holy example to me
Eternal in existence
Patience personified
Heaven's mansions design
Everlasting Son-shine
Reigns in Glory
Delighted to be His
Comment Written 15-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2013
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I am glad you liked the poem. :-) Carolyn
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Me too girl.
Comment from Janet Foor
Excellent Bible acrostic poem.
Very insightful a d encouraging.
Lovely picture to enhance your thoughtful words.
Good work and good luck in the contest. Blessings
Janet :-)
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2013
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Excellent Bible acrostic poem.
Very insightful a d encouraging.
Lovely picture to enhance your thoughtful words.
Good work and good luck in the contest. Blessings
Janet :-)
Comment Written 14-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2013
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Thank you for the wonderful review and I am happy you liked it. It was a blessing to write.
Comment from Tinkadoll
I definitely think that your poem is the best one in the contest! I hope you win! My favorite line is "Everlasting Son-shine"... that is an awesome play on words... I love it! Great work!
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2013
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I definitely think that your poem is the best one in the contest! I hope you win! My favorite line is "Everlasting Son-shine"... that is an awesome play on words... I love it! Great work!
Comment Written 14-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2013
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Thank you for the insightful comments. I am glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Maureen's Pen
This is a strong spiritual acrostic and a great submission for the contest.
The few lines below stuck with me longer:
"Eternal in existence
Patience personified" // This stuck out for me because of the eternal, encompassing all with patience.
Thanks for sharing, and the poke to read, I would of missed it otherwise. Good luck in the contest.
Maureen
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2013
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This is a strong spiritual acrostic and a great submission for the contest.
The few lines below stuck with me longer:
"Eternal in existence
Patience personified" // This stuck out for me because of the eternal, encompassing all with patience.
Thanks for sharing, and the poke to read, I would of missed it otherwise. Good luck in the contest.
Maureen
Comment Written 14-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2013
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Thanks for the good review. I am glad you liked it. The poem was written quickly with much enjoyment. Winning isn't the important part, there are a lot of wonderful entries.
Comment from Curly Girly
This is a wonderful verse and you have done it so well! I am sure that it will be a strong contender in the contest. Thanks for choosing my image. CG
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2013
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This is a wonderful verse and you have done it so well! I am sure that it will be a strong contender in the contest. Thanks for choosing my image. CG
Comment Written 14-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2013
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Thank you for such a sweet picture it worked out beautifully. Wish you could vote. :-)
Comment from seewhatimwritingnow
I don't believe your name is supposed to be at the bottom of you poem- since this is a 'blind' contest? Otherwise, it is well written, beautifully presented. Best of luck in the contest. Betty
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2013
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I don't believe your name is supposed to be at the bottom of you poem- since this is a 'blind' contest? Otherwise, it is well written, beautifully presented. Best of luck in the contest. Betty
Comment Written 14-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2013
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Thanks Betty, I am sorry I am so use to signing. I have removed it. I am glad you like it and that is the main thing :-)