Christ
Faith trickled down.7 total reviews
Comment from RYME4U
Very nicely written. I like the rhythm and rhyme you have put in this Bible acrostic.The meaning of its message is quite clear. The artwork well chosen.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2013
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Very nicely written. I like the rhythm and rhyme you have put in this Bible acrostic.The meaning of its message is quite clear. The artwork well chosen.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2013
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thanks for reviewing.
Comment from seewhatimwritingnow
Beautifully presented and well-written! Great word chosen for this acrostic, 'Christ'. You have told the story well of his purpose and our following. Best of luck in the contest! Betty
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2013
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Beautifully presented and well-written! Great word chosen for this acrostic, 'Christ'. You have told the story well of his purpose and our following. Best of luck in the contest! Betty
Comment Written 14-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Econ Teacher
This acrostic of the word Christ does a great job of making the story of Jesus personal by the use of the word we. It is truly wonderful how all it takes is faith to be transformed.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2013
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This acrostic of the word Christ does a great job of making the story of Jesus personal by the use of the word we. It is truly wonderful how all it takes is faith to be transformed.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2013
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Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, mystery writer, you did an excellent job writing this beautiful poem about the faith that helps us transform this world we're in instead of being conformed to it. beautiful picture choice. good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2013
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this is very well written, mystery writer, you did an excellent job writing this beautiful poem about the faith that helps us transform this world we're in instead of being conformed to it. beautiful picture choice. good luck in the contest
Comment Written 13-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from poetic1988
this is a nice poem, about one person view of faith and religion espeically being that today is the start of lent.
keep up the good work
the poem is nice
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2013
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this is a nice poem, about one person view of faith and religion espeically being that today is the start of lent.
keep up the good work
the poem is nice
Comment Written 13-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2013
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thank you for reviewing.
Comment from tedanytime
You did well, and I give this a higher nudge.
A little point, if I may? The last is probably not we that atone, but it is HIM WHO CAN ATONE.
Christ in an acrostic ... good one.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2013
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You did well, and I give this a higher nudge.
A little point, if I may? The last is probably not we that atone, but it is HIM WHO CAN ATONE.
Christ in an acrostic ... good one.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2013
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thank you for reviewing.
Comment from Patricia1
I truly love the poem & picture (looks like it could be a piece of heaven!) to go with it! The poem held so much truth & meaning! Yes, our faith is what will sustain us through our trials, & struggles here til we get to heaven. Great job!
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2013
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I truly love the poem & picture (looks like it could be a piece of heaven!) to go with it! The poem held so much truth & meaning! Yes, our faith is what will sustain us through our trials, & struggles here til we get to heaven. Great job!
Comment Written 13-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2013
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Thank you for the great review. and welcome to Fanstory.