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Viewing comments for Chapter 77 "Perfect Day - Free Verse"
All of my poems of release.

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Comment from Indie Skreet
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and many congratulations and what a beautiful photo. I wish them every happiness too :) Sweetly worded Jaq, showing what a loving mother you are, warmly as always, Indie

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2013


reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
    Thanks Indie, always a pleasure to hear your thoughts. :) Jaq xx
Comment from October21
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Aw! Jaq! How did I not see this? The temptation to review has gotten the best of me!!! Well done on showing how happy they are and how perfect the day was. Indeed this is just the beginning of a wonderful life together:-)

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2013


reply by the author on 13-Feb-2013
    Thanks Shenel it was a wonderful day and so very happy. Everything went perfectly to plan. :) Jaq xxx
Comment from Gungalo
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Very beautiful girl and definitely all grown up now. Such a beautiful verse you wrote girl. Hard to believe so much time has gone by, eh?

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2013


reply by the author on 13-Feb-2013
    Awww thanks Gungalo, she's my all. :) You are so kind. xxx Jaq
reply by Gungalo on 13-Feb-2013
    She's beautiful and it must have been a fabulous wedding girl.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2013
    It was indeed :) xxx
reply by Gungalo on 13-Feb-2013
    Good for her and good for you!!!
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2013
    Many thanks Gungalo - smiling here - xx
reply by Gungalo on 13-Feb-2013
    Sigh ....
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
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This is very well written and indeed beautiful I love the photograph of your daughter and son in law they are indeed very happy your daughter is a credit to you well done on expressing your thoughts and feelings so well regards Jill

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2013


reply by the author on 13-Feb-2013
    Thank you so much my friend, always appreciated. I love them to bits. :) Jaq xx
Comment from Maureen's Pen
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Hi Jaq, I don't know how I missed this one?

It's a stunning picture of the happy couple. Beauty and love shines from their faces. I loved the poem it reflects as well as wishes love, happiness and a new sense of family blooms.

You did a great job on this one Jaq, I enjoyed it and thanks for letting me see the picture or I would have missed this one. I can feel your pride and your love flowing through this one too:)

Love
Maureen

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2013


reply by the author on 13-Feb-2013
    Maureen, I love them both dearly. There has only ever been me and Michaela(my daughter) so she is my pride and joy indeed. Thanks for that my friend, love n hugs :) Jaq x
Comment from adewpearl
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What a sweet picture and blissfully happy couple! :-)
Our children are our joy - and now she can get busy canoodling to give you some grand babies LOL :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2013


reply by the author on 13-Feb-2013
    Lol I actually hope so Brooke :) xx
Comment from C Hope
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Very sweet rhymes to incorporate this memoric moment of a daughter's wedding. Blessings of happiness both to daughter and mother of the bride. Enjoyed! Smiles, Charlotte

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2013


reply by the author on 10-Feb-2013
    Thank you Charlotte. :) Jaq x
Comment from judelesemann
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What a lovely, nostalgic poem. You have told the story well and with great motherly love. It must have been a wonderful day. Keep on writing. Be blessed, Jude

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2013


reply by the author on 10-Feb-2013
    Thank you Jude it was a great day indeed. They both looked wonderful :) Jaq x
Comment from Patricia1
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Such a lovely photo to go with this heartfelt poem. The wedding day of your child is a happy one but the realization that they are all grown up and onto their own life can give a little twinge of sadness. Good job.

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2013


reply by the author on 09-Feb-2013
    Thank you so much Patricia, I guess it's a little bittersweet, but definitely more sweet. :)
Comment from elliejean
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I love the picture. I love the poem. I felt great happiness when my children walked down the aisle too. It is a giant step into adult life. Great work.

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2013


reply by the author on 09-Feb-2013
    Thank you elliejean, appreciated x
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2013
    Thank you elliejean, appreciated x