My Life in words
Viewing comments for Chapter 112 "You killed my soul."All of my poems of release.
8 total reviews
Comment from Charade
Ouch, I feel it.
I don't know if this is based on real life, but if it is, you can't beat yourself up over this. I love that I can feel the sorrow, but yet there's still a hopeful ending. Great job!
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2012
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Ouch, I feel it.
I don't know if this is based on real life, but if it is, you can't beat yourself up over this. I love that I can feel the sorrow, but yet there's still a hopeful ending. Great job!
Comment Written 13-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2012
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Unfortunately it was life, but it has taught me a valuable lesson. Thanks for your kind review Charade.
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I was reading all of the ones in this contest, and I have to say that I realized that we wouldn't know sadnessness without first knowing happiness. We wouldn't appreciate happiness without sadness. While it isn't something to enjoy, it is the manure that makes us flowers grow. praying for you!
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Every thing in our lives whether good or bad makes us who we are today. It is all mapped out for us. :)
Comment from Bina1
Glad to see your notes! But the scar is still there. A fine poem, a dreadful soul you write of. Thank you for sharing. Good luck in the contest. A fine entry!
realized vs realised
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2012
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Glad to see your notes! But the scar is still there. A fine poem, a dreadful soul you write of. Thank you for sharing. Good luck in the contest. A fine entry!
realized vs realised
Comment Written 13-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2012
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Yes Bina1 it does scar you but no longer defines me. I can't let it. Thank you so much for your lovely review.
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Good thinking!
Comment from mruss1
Sorry I can give you the six this deserves I guess I have reached my limit. Kind of a stupid rule:) I enjoyed the piece very much and you don't give yourself enough credit this was exceptional because the words came from your heart. Take care and I'm not allowed to tell you what I am going to do you will have to guess:) Mark
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2012
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Sorry I can give you the six this deserves I guess I have reached my limit. Kind of a stupid rule:) I enjoyed the piece very much and you don't give yourself enough credit this was exceptional because the words came from your heart. Take care and I'm not allowed to tell you what I am going to do you will have to guess:) Mark
Comment Written 13-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2012
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So glad you liked it my friend, your review is much appreciated.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, mystery writer, you did an excellent job writing this poignant poem about the love that turned against you, good luck in the contest...
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2012
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this is very well written, mystery writer, you did an excellent job writing this poignant poem about the love that turned against you, good luck in the contest...
Comment Written 13-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2012
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Thank you so much SWJ, your review means a lot.
Comment from elliejean
I love the poem. I love the author notes. I felt that way with my first husband. The man was and still is a creep. But he now lives alone with himself. That is the best punishment I could think of.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2012
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I love the poem. I love the author notes. I felt that way with my first husband. The man was and still is a creep. But he now lives alone with himself. That is the best punishment I could think of.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2012
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Too true elliejean, they deserve nothing less. Thanks for your review.
Comment from Janet Foor
I am pleased to hear that you are no long in that place. Writing about our circumstances, often is very therapeutic and helpful. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2012
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I am pleased to hear that you are no long in that place. Writing about our circumstances, often is very therapeutic and helpful. Best wishes.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2012
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Thank you so much for your kind words.
Comment from Treischel
This is a powerfully written poem of how love can be deceiving and how the one you love can put on an act for a while. I had that experience with my first wife who I went with for 4 years, but who became a different person after we were married. Your poem has a tight tempo and wonderful abab rhyming scheme. The cover picture, combined with the infused poetic phraseology creates a haunting, desperate realization. Glad you moved on.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2012
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This is a powerfully written poem of how love can be deceiving and how the one you love can put on an act for a while. I had that experience with my first wife who I went with for 4 years, but who became a different person after we were married. Your poem has a tight tempo and wonderful abab rhyming scheme. The cover picture, combined with the infused poetic phraseology creates a haunting, desperate realization. Glad you moved on.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2012
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Thank you so much Treischel, once I realised the sadness should be his and not mine it was a defining moment. :)
Comment from Carmanie Bhatti
Simply awesome thoguhts put down so neatly and beautilly into simple and clear words ! Great poem ! The thoughts are from the heart depcting the mind of the poet and at the same time taking us into the thoughts portrayed !
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2012
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Simply awesome thoguhts put down so neatly and beautilly into simple and clear words ! Great poem ! The thoughts are from the heart depcting the mind of the poet and at the same time taking us into the thoughts portrayed !
Comment Written 13-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2012
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Thank you so much Carmanie for your lovely review.
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My Pleasure :)