Leaving the nest
A bird leaves everything2 total reviews
Comment from Patricia1
This is very good although sad too. Lots of emotion and meaning can be interpreted in this short piece. So sad to have to be faced with terminal illness of those you care about. Good job on this!
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013
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This is very good although sad too. Lots of emotion and meaning can be interpreted in this short piece. So sad to have to be faced with terminal illness of those you care about. Good job on this!
Comment Written 15-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013
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thank i try to write what i feel and this came to me thank you for your review
Comment from me_tudor
I liked this poem. It was a little different from others I've read. I think I would say "expresses all" instead of "express all," but other than that it was good. Sorry about your friend. :(
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013
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I liked this poem. It was a little different from others I've read. I think I would say "expresses all" instead of "express all," but other than that it was good. Sorry about your friend. :(
Comment Written 15-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013
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thank you for your review and your suggestion