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A collection of treasured poems
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Comment from
humpwhistle
I'm assuming there's a missing word in the first
line of your poem--'have', maybe?
We all talk to ourselves, and direct our own
actions. It is simply the way we operate.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 04-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2012
Comment from
Rondeno
Good poem, great art work. Just one thing - the verb is "lose", not "loose". Is it two aspects of one person, or a lover who is so intimate with a partner that they are one consciousness? perhaps it doesn't matter.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2012
Thanks for your advice i have now changed it and yes It is just the one person
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