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Comment from Rondeno
Nice poem. However, as I understand it, "Cloud 9" is a place of bliss and delight. You have depicted it as a center of doubt and confusion. Am I wrong?
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2012
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Nice poem. However, as I understand it, "Cloud 9" is a place of bliss and delight. You have depicted it as a center of doubt and confusion. Am I wrong?
Comment Written 03-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2012
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You are right, I was using cloud 9 as some one with thoughts of despair
Comment from doris1022
He called my name too...I am so glad he cared enough to call me in my desperation. fine write and uplifting. Thanks for sharing today for our edification.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2012
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He called my name too...I am so glad he cared enough to call me in my desperation. fine write and uplifting. Thanks for sharing today for our edification.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2012
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Pleased you enjoyed