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4 total reviews
Comment from doris1022
very nice work! romantic and sweet...build up of the love as god like. too bad when the honeymoon goes to the next stage. no errors I see.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2012
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very nice work! romantic and sweet...build up of the love as god like. too bad when the honeymoon goes to the next stage. no errors I see.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2012
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Thank you doris22
Comment from Gungalo
Ah this one is for the married folks out there and it is so very beautiful. It's nice to know that the rings are both still being worn.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2012
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Ah this one is for the married folks out there and it is so very beautiful. It's nice to know that the rings are both still being worn.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2012
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Thank you Gungalo
Comment from ernesto escarro
Love Story
Each lover thrusts feeling towards partner
encouraging each can do things that seem impossible.
Being both as love story, each one understand what this feeling of trust and confidence mean.
They mean to formulate story.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2012
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Love Story
Each lover thrusts feeling towards partner
encouraging each can do things that seem impossible.
Being both as love story, each one understand what this feeling of trust and confidence mean.
They mean to formulate story.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2012
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Thank you for your review ernesto
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Thanks for sharing.
Comment from OLA THOMAS
The beauty of this work is its smoothness and simple delivery which in anyway does not score it any lower. I like the softness.
ola thomas
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2012
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The beauty of this work is its smoothness and simple delivery which in anyway does not score it any lower. I like the softness.
ola thomas
Comment Written 28-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2012
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Thank you OLA
