Free Love
6 lines (2,2,2,2,9,9 syllables)7 total reviews
Comment from angel123
I love your poem and enjoyed reading it. It flows well and it tells a complete story. Your artwork choice goes well with your thoughts. I liked the way you use your cleverness and wit in writing this poem.
Angel123
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2012
  |
I love your poem and enjoyed reading it. It flows well and it tells a complete story. Your artwork choice goes well with your thoughts. I liked the way you use your cleverness and wit in writing this poem.
Angel123
Comment Written 29-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2012
-
Thank you for taking the time to review my poem.
Comment from Bojenn
This is a great romantic poem. I love the illustration you chose as it seemed to put it in the romantic era for poetry.
Enjoyable indeed!
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2012
|
This is a great romantic poem. I love the illustration you chose as it seemed to put it in the romantic era for poetry.
Enjoyable indeed!
Comment Written 29-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2012
-
Thank you for taking the time to review my poem.
Comment from gazzagodbod
love the sexy sensual approach you captured my friend and the words make for a great read thank you so much and all the best gazza
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2012
|
love the sexy sensual approach you captured my friend and the words make for a great read thank you so much and all the best gazza
Comment Written 28-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2012
-
Thank you for taking the time to review my poem.
Comment from hollyinvesuvianite
I do like this style of poetry and i think that you created a compelling image with this intense piece of erotica and unbridled passion. Great work and good luck in the contest! Holly
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2012
|
I do like this style of poetry and i think that you created a compelling image with this intense piece of erotica and unbridled passion. Great work and good luck in the contest! Holly
Comment Written 28-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2012
-
Thank you for taking the time to review my poem.
Comment from Slythytove2
You're correct with the syllable count. The meaning is clear but I'm thinking that heart has been substituted for form.I don't feel any true emotion in the words. Perhaps the answer why not can be found in that deluge of computer gibberish in your author's notes. What type of Haiku is a 222266?
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2012
 |
You're correct with the syllable count. The meaning is clear but I'm thinking that heart has been substituted for form.I don't feel any true emotion in the words. Perhaps the answer why not can be found in that deluge of computer gibberish in your author's notes. What type of Haiku is a 222266?
Comment Written 28-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2012
-
Thank you for taking the time to review my poem. I don't believe 222266 is a type of haiku.
-
I know its not, but I'd still like to know how your Author's notes were supposed to help us understand what you were saying?
Comment from el twelve
that was very well written and the picture very complimentary. These short poems are very succinct and to the point. good work, good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2012
|
that was very well written and the picture very complimentary. These short poems are very succinct and to the point. good work, good luck in the contest
Comment Written 28-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2012
-
Thank you for taking the time to review my poem.
Comment from alexisleech
Well done for not only sticking to the rigid syllable count in your clever little poem, but making a very good point. Thank goodness there are still things that are tax free!
Alexis x
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2012
|
Well done for not only sticking to the rigid syllable count in your clever little poem, but making a very good point. Thank goodness there are still things that are tax free!
Alexis x
Comment Written 28-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2012
-
Thank you for taking the time to review my poem.