Animated Stills
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Comment from Joan E.
An Rhymed Animated Aebecedarian Storypoem--now, that's ambitious. I could see the wraiths in it and your photograph and enjoyed your use of alliteration and the names of the witches. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2016
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An Rhymed Animated Aebecedarian Storypoem--now, that's ambitious. I could see the wraiths in it and your photograph and enjoyed your use of alliteration and the names of the witches. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 07-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2016
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Thank you Joan.
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
You have a knack for capturing just the right image
to complement your poetry.
An Abcedarian poem can ask quite a lot of imagination and skill .
You have achieved the quest well with an unusual style of poetry.
:-) Shirley
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2016
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You have a knack for capturing just the right image
to complement your poetry.
An Abcedarian poem can ask quite a lot of imagination and skill .
You have achieved the quest well with an unusual style of poetry.
:-) Shirley
Comment Written 07-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2016
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Thank you Shirkey for a great review and compliment.
Comment from Just2Write
This is a fun ABDderian - and a great entry into the contest. There's a lot of skill here in getting the story to flow so well, and to find words that fit into the very difficult categories of Q, X, Y and Z.
The witches are very believable, and one has not trouble at all visualizing them prancing out beside the lake.
Rose.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2016
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This is a fun ABDderian - and a great entry into the contest. There's a lot of skill here in getting the story to flow so well, and to find words that fit into the very difficult categories of Q, X, Y and Z.
The witches are very believable, and one has not trouble at all visualizing them prancing out beside the lake.
Rose.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2016
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Thank you Rose. Glad you enjoyed this little dance.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Oh, well done you!! That was brilliant. I look forward to meeting these lovely ladies again! I do like witch stories, I have one about the Witch of Lovely, (of course, I don't do horrid witches, lol) To have written this as an abecedarian poem too, is amazing, it is hard enough to do without turning it into a story. I am well impressed! Well done, my friend. When will you begin the others? :) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2016
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Oh, well done you!! That was brilliant. I look forward to meeting these lovely ladies again! I do like witch stories, I have one about the Witch of Lovely, (of course, I don't do horrid witches, lol) To have written this as an abecedarian poem too, is amazing, it is hard enough to do without turning it into a story. I am well impressed! Well done, my friend. When will you begin the others? :) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 05-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2016
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Thank you Sandra. Sometime in the next week. I have some ideas, but don't have any photos to go with them. It's been raining here and I need to get out among some high grasses.
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Hmm, that sounds interesting, I wonder what those three witches will be up too! We are having a lovely sunny day here, for a change! xx
Comment from Joyce Long
Congratulations for your Recognized ribbon. This story was a fun read as you reintroduce the three witches. I'll look forward to reading their stories. Your picture of the river band is beautiful. Thanks for sharing.
Joyce 04-05-16
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2016
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Congratulations for your Recognized ribbon. This story was a fun read as you reintroduce the three witches. I'll look forward to reading their stories. Your picture of the river band is beautiful. Thanks for sharing.
Joyce 04-05-16
Comment Written 05-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2016
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Thank you Joyce.
Comment from VaV-VOOM
Very awesome read, I am glad you brought it back. I could see them dancing around and around with all the night creature's watching. Good read, thank you. 3X3X3 VaV-VOOM!
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2016
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Very awesome read, I am glad you brought it back. I could see them dancing around and around with all the night creature's watching. Good read, thank you. 3X3X3 VaV-VOOM!
Comment Written 05-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2016
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Thank you Vav-Voom.
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Your welcome. VaV-VOOM!
Comment from foxangie123
Can you just write every way of poetry my dear, serious. Another amazing piece of writing you have here. I so enjoy your work as it is always above board.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2016
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Can you just write every way of poetry my dear, serious. Another amazing piece of writing you have here. I so enjoy your work as it is always above board.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2016
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Thank you foxangie. I try.
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You my dear are always welcome.
Comment from Pantygynt
A rhyming Abcdarian with an impressive stack of alliteration and consonance in it as well. My favourite line of all here is,
"Marilee merrily marching, matching beat."
In that one short line one almost loses count of the instances of alliteration and consonance.. Gorgeouse.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2016
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A rhyming Abcdarian with an impressive stack of alliteration and consonance in it as well. My favourite line of all here is,
"Marilee merrily marching, matching beat."
In that one short line one almost loses count of the instances of alliteration and consonance.. Gorgeouse.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2016
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Thank you Pantygynt. I remember smiling when I wrote it.
Comment from TAB_that's me
This is a bit different than your usual style. It will be interesting to see what you do in the future with the 3 witches:)
teresa
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2016
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This is a bit different than your usual style. It will be interesting to see what you do in the future with the 3 witches:)
teresa
Comment Written 05-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2016
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Thank you Teresa. I haven't yet figured that out, but I just know I want to.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A great imaginative poem of what you see in the picture witches dancing hand in hand, the witches make a wish to fly and the Queen of nature release the spell.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2016
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A great imaginative poem of what you see in the picture witches dancing hand in hand, the witches make a wish to fly and the Queen of nature release the spell.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2016
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Thank you Sandra. Yes, just a flight of imagination. I hope you could see the dancing forms in that image, the site distorts the original a bit.