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Comment from ajdevore
Very appealing and perfect picture. One comment - but first, know, I am totally ignorant about poetry, to take it with a grain of salt!
I think 'Just take time to walk' is more powerful. The plenty doesn't add anything.
I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.
Regards
Anna
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2012
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Very appealing and perfect picture. One comment - but first, know, I am totally ignorant about poetry, to take it with a grain of salt!
I think 'Just take time to walk' is more powerful. The plenty doesn't add anything.
I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.
Regards
Anna
Comment Written 17-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2012
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Please re read ajdevore, and let me know
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your concse, thought-provoking poem reminds the reader that, though the phases of life may seem lengthy, life itself is not. We must think as we go--not always be rushing to what's next.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2012
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Your concse, thought-provoking poem reminds the reader that, though the phases of life may seem lengthy, life itself is not. We must think as we go--not always be rushing to what's next.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2012
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That is so true Janice